Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak more fluently and concisely: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh, um), correct singular/plural forms, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Aim for maximum five sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph mountain ranges at sunrise because the light creates dramatic shadows and colors. I also like capturing beaches in the evening when the sky turns orange, which makes the scene more peaceful.

Suggestion: Clarify and organize your answer: start with a direct statement of preference, then give two clear, specific reasons linked logically. Avoid unclear phrases and pronunciation errors; practice key vocabulary like 'open spaces' and 'feel free'.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas. Firstly, rural places have wide open spaces, so you can see mountains and fields without obstructions. Secondly, the atmosphere feels calmer, which makes it easier to enjoy and photograph the scenery.

Suggestion: Reduce repetition and organize sentences: start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and a brief reason. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'because' to make your answer coherent.

Example: I prefer the views in my own country, Myanmar, because it has a wide variety of landscapes. For example, you can find dramatic mountain ranges in the north and stunning beaches along the coast, so there is always somewhere breathtaking to visit.

× I love to take pictures of different view, especially like, uh, mountain views and the, uh, beach view as far as I love to, uh, take pictures for beautiful moments, uh.

✓ I love to take pictures of different views, especially mountain views and beach views, because I love to capture beautiful moments.

The noun 'view' should be plural ('views') to match 'different' and the list of multiple scenic types. 'Beach view' should be 'beach views' for parallelism with 'mountain views'. Also 'take pictures for beautiful moments' is unnatural; 'capture beautiful moments' is clearer. Suggestions: ensure nouns agree in number when referring to multiple items and keep parallel structure in lists.

× Frankly speaking, I love Prof I love use in the rural areas because in the rural areas the spaces are quite open and people can see all the beautiful scenes directly through their eye.

✓ Frankly speaking, I prefer to use (or: I prefer being) the rural areas because they are quite open and people can see all the beautiful scenery with their eyes.

The original sentence contains non-word 'Prof' and incorrect pronoun phrases. 'Prefer' was mistyped as 'Prof' and 'I love use in the rural areas' is ungrammatical. 'Spaces' is acceptable but 'they' should refer to 'rural areas'; 'the beautiful scenes directly through their eye' is wrong: 'scenery' is uncountable and 'with their eyes' is the correct idiom. Suggestions: correct typos, use 'prefer to' + verb or 'prefer' + gerund, and use correct pronouns/pronoun agreement ('they' for plural) and standard collocations like 'with their eyes'.

× And also people can feed the light, uh, fee fee free.

✓ Also, people can feel free.

'Feed the light' is incorrect and unclear; the intended meaning seems to be 'feel free'. 'Feel' is the correct verb, and 'free' is an adjective describing people. Suggestion: use the correct verb 'feel' and avoid repetition; keep it concise.

× I prefer views in my own country in Myanmar, there are so many beautiful places, uh, not only the mountainous areas, but also of, but also the sea views.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country, Myanmar; there are so many beautiful places, not only mountainous areas but also sea views.

The original is a run-on with repetition and extra words ('of, but also'). Use a clearer structure: 'I prefer the views in my own country, Myanmar; there are...' or split into two sentences. Remove redundant words and ensure parallelism in the list ('not only X but also Y').

× You can see breathtaking places whenever you go.

✓ You can see breathtaking places wherever you go.

'Whenever' refers to time; 'wherever' is the correct word when referring to locations. Suggestion: use 'wherever' for location-related clauses and 'whenever' for time-related clauses.

× I prefer views in my own country in Myanmar, there are so many beautiful places, uh, not only the mountainous areas, but also of, but also the sea views. You can see breathtaking places whenever you go. So I definitely love the views in my country.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country, Myanmar. There are so many beautiful places, not only mountainous areas but also sea views. You can see breathtaking places wherever you go, so I definitely love the views in my country.

Combined run-on sentences caused unclear subject-verb structure. Splitting into sentences clarifies subject-verb agreement: 'There are' correctly matches plural 'places'. Also ensure consistent pronoun and verb forms. Suggestion: break long run-on sentences into shorter, grammatically complete sentences and check that subjects and verbs agree in number.