Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar, include a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "capture beautiful moments" and "remember places" are similar) and fix verb forms and countable nouns ("photos"). Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me preserve memorable scenes. For example, I often take photos with friends when we visit parks or viewpoints, so I can look back at those moments later.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence and add one clear reason with a specific example. Correct small errors ("on weekends") and use linking words like "because" or "so" to show cause and effect. Mention specific sensory details to make the answer more vivid.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more relaxing. For instance, I often go to the countryside on weekends with friends to walk through fields and take photos of sunsets, which helps me unwind.

Suggestion: Use a clearer topic sentence (e.g., "I prefer views in my own country") and correct grammar ("I prefer views in my own country" not "I refer"); fix articles and plurals ("mountains and beaches"). Provide one specific example and a brief reason why familiarity matters. Use a linking word like "because" to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and evoke fond memories. For example, I often visit the mountains and nearby beaches, where I can relax and enjoy scenery that reminds me of home.

× it helps me capture beautiful moments around me so I can remember places and landscapes that I ever visited.

✓ it helps me capture beautiful moments around me so I can remember places and landscapes that I have visited.

The phrase 'ever visited' is unnatural in this context. Use present perfect ('have visited') to link past experiences with the present memory. Also place 'ever' appropriately (e.g., 'have you ever visited') or omit it here. Suggestion: use 'that I have visited' to indicate experiences up to now.

× For example, I often take photo with my friends.

✓ For example, I often take photos with my friends.

'Photo' is countable and needs the plural form 'photos' when referring to more than one. Use 'photos' because 'often' implies multiple instances.

× I often go to the countryside with my friends on weekend and we capture many beautiful moments there.

✓ I often go to the countryside with my friends on weekends and we capture many beautiful moments there.

'On weekend' is incorrect; use 'on weekends' for regular occurrences or 'at the weekend' (British English). The plural 'weekends' fits 'often'. Also 'the countryside' is correct already.

× I refer views in my own country because they are more familiar and they also remind me of home.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because they are more familiar and they also remind me of home.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'prefer'. This is a lexical error rather than a pronoun error, but it fits common error categories supplied. 'Prefer' correctly expresses choice. No pronoun change is needed.

× For example, I often go to a mountains and beaches, which are famous attractions in my country, to relax.

✓ For example, I often go to mountains and beaches, which are famous attractions in my country, to relax.

The indefinite article 'a' cannot be used with the plural noun 'mountains'. Remove 'a' to make 'mountains and beaches'. If a singular was intended, use 'a mountain' and specify which one. Also 'beaches' is fine as plural.