Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), and give one or two specific reasons with examples. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because, so, therefore). Keep under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special places. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach to capture the colors and the mood, so I can look back at them later and remember the time I spent there.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference or say you like both and explain with specific, correct vocabulary. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'urban areas have modern architecture' not 'beautiful sports are make'). Use linking words (however, while, for example) and one concrete example per area.

Example: I like both urban and rural views because they offer different experiences. For example, urban areas have modern architecture and lively streets, while rural areas have traditional temples and quiet landscapes that show local culture.

Suggestion: Structure your answer with a clear main idea and concise reasoning. Avoid repetition ("in my country and in other countries" twice). Use specific examples or comparisons and linking words (for example, firstly, also, however). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Example: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad because each offers unique sights. For instance, I like exploring historic sites at home first, but I also travel abroad to see natural wonders or architecture that I can't find locally.

× I like to take pictures of different views because, uh, the view is very beautiful that cannot be memorized later.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views because the scenery is so beautiful that it cannot be memorized later.

The original sentence has awkward structure and an incorrect relative clause. 'the view is very beautiful that cannot be memorized later' is ungrammatical. Replace 'view' with 'scenery' (more natural) and use 'so...that' to express result: 'so beautiful that it cannot be memorized.' This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× So I take picture of the views, uh, so that, uh, later we can memorize the place and the beautiful place where we spend a lot of time, our precious time, uh, where we spent, uh, so that's why we are taking picture of the different views.

✓ So I take pictures of the views so that later we can remember the beautiful places where we spent our precious time, which is why we take pictures of different views.

Errors: 'take picture' should be plural 'take pictures' (singular/plural and article), 'memorize' is incorrect verb choice—use 'remember'. 'where we spend a lot of time' conflicts with past 'spent'; use past 'spent' to match context. Reorganize to avoid repetition and to correct verb forms. This addresses plural/article issues and tense consistency.

× in urban area you can see the development and beautiful sports are make in urban areas,

✓ in urban areas you can see development and beautiful sports facilities being built,

Use plural 'urban areas' for general statements. 'the development' can be 'development' (no article) or 'development projects'. 'beautiful sports are make' is incorrect: needs noun 'sports facilities' and passive continuous 'being built' or active 'being made'. This fixes article and noun phrase usage.

× while in rural areas you can see there are other traditional temples which are beautifully built by our ancestors so that.

✓ while in rural areas you can see traditional temples that were beautifully built by our ancestors.

Remove redundant 'other' and trailing 'so that'. Use 'that were beautifully built' to indicate past action by ancestors; 'by our ancestors' is acceptable. This corrects unnecessary prepositions/phrases and tense.

× This is an interesting question. I prefer views in both countries in my country and in other countries also because they offer many varieties to exploring the different places which I can't see in my country also.

✓ This is an interesting question. I prefer views in both my country and other countries because they offer a variety of places to explore that I cannot see at home.

Original has redundant and awkward phrasing: 'views in both countries in my country and in other countries also' is repetitive. 'many varieties to exploring' is ungrammatical; use 'a variety of places to explore.' 'which I can't see in my country also' should be 'that I cannot see at home.' Rewriting clarifies meaning and fixes sentence structure.

× So first of all I visit I've been exploring my country and then exploring other countries to see the beautiful views in different countries.

✓ So first of all I visit and explore my own country, and then I explore other countries to see beautiful views.

The original mixes present simple 'visit' with present perfect continuous 'I've been exploring' and repeats 'in different countries.' For clarity and correct tense, use parallel present simple verbs 'visit and explore' or present perfect for completed experience. The corrected sentence uses consistent present simple to describe general preference/order.