Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and add one specific detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers like "uh", and use plurals and verb forms correctly. For example, say why you take photos and give one specific object you like to photograph.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures because they preserve memories. For example, I often photograph old buildings and colorful flowers when I travel to remember the places I visited.

Suggestion: Provide a direct answer first, then give a brief contrast using linking words (e.g., "however", "on the other hand") and specific examples. Fix grammar ("It depends", "I like busy cities", "relaxed countryside"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer busy cities because I enjoy photographing modern architecture and street life; however, at other times I like the relaxed countryside for its peaceful landscapes and farms.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement and support it with two specific reasons—one for your country and one for other countries. Correct grammar ("unique local food", "other countries I have visited") and avoid vague phrases like "I also want to choose the visitor." Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I enjoy both. My country offers unique local food and beautiful landscapes that feel familiar, while visiting places like the UK lets me appreciate different architecture and cultural sights.

× Yes, I would like taking picture because can keep the memories and also can uh take a lot of beautiful buildings, flowers or anything else.

✓ Yes, I would like to take pictures because they can keep memories and I can also take many photos of beautiful buildings, flowers, or other things.

Errors: 'would like taking' uses incorrect verb + -ing; after 'would like' use base form 'to take' (Verb + to-infinitive). 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' (Singular/plural). Missing subject 'they' before 'can keep the memories' and 'can' needs an explicit subject; revise to 'they can keep memories'. 'a lot of beautiful buildings, flowers or anything else' is awkward; use 'many photos of beautiful buildings, flowers, or other things.' Suggestion: use 'would like to + verb', ensure plural nouns when general, include clear subjects for modal verbs, and use natural collocations like 'take photos'.

× It's depends on my feelings on sometimes I like to build some like busy city, while sometimes I like to see a very relaxed uh, buildings and country.

✓ It depends on my feelings. Sometimes I like busy cities, while other times I prefer relaxed buildings and the countryside.

'It's depends' is incorrect: after subject use base verb so 'It depends' (Present tense agreement). 'on sometimes' is misplaced; separate into sentences. 'I like to build some like busy city' is wrong word choice and structure: 'like to build' should be 'like' or 'prefer', and 'busy city' should be plural 'busy cities' if general. 'a very relaxed uh, buildings and country' mixes singular/plural and nouns; use 'relaxed buildings and the countryside' or 'the countryside' alone. Suggestions: use correct subject-verb agreement in present simple, avoid unnecessary 'to' before verbs of preference, use consistent singular/plural forms, and reorder for clarity.

× I enjoy both. My country has a very unique authentic foods and beautiful local landscape.

✓ I enjoy both. My country has very unique, authentic foods and beautiful local landscapes.

'has a very unique authentic foods' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'foods' and uses redundant modifiers. Remove 'a' and pluralize 'landscape' or use 'landscapes'. Also place adjectives in correct order: 'very unique, authentic foods'. Suggestion: match article and noun number, keep adjective order, and pluralize count nouns when referring generally.

× I also want to choose the visitor but I also enjoy the views from others countries that I have been visited such as the UK where I appreciate.

✓ I also want to be a visitor, and I enjoy views from other countries that I have visited, such as the UK, which I appreciate.

'want to choose the visitor' is incorrect pronoun/phrase; likely intended 'want to be a visitor' or 'want to visit'. 'others countries' should be 'other countries' (adjective form). 'that I have been visited' uses passive incorrectly; correct is 'that I have visited'. 'such as the UK where I appreciate' is incomplete; use 'such as the UK, which I appreciate' or 'which I enjoyed.' Suggestions: use correct pronouns and verb forms (active voice 'I have visited'), use 'other' not 'others' before plural noun, and complete relative clauses.