Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more grammatical, concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail and a brief example. Reduce hesitations and repetition. Use linking words (for example, because) to connect ideas and use correct verb forms and articles.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because I love capturing beautiful scenes. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes, but my devices often run out of storage because I take so many high-resolution pictures.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then add a specific reason and an example. Correct grammar (use past tense correctly and appropriate infinitives/gerunds). Use one linking word (because/so) to explain why you prefer rural views.

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I enjoy being close to nature. For instance, I like photographing fields and forests since the natural light and quiet atmosphere make my pictures look more peaceful.

Suggestion: Answer directly whether you prefer local or foreign views, then give a clear reason and a short example. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary (prefer visiting/photographing my own country) and clearer structure: topic sentence + reason + example. Mention specifics (locations or features) to strengthen content.

Example: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I feel more connected to local places and cultures. For example, in Uzbekistan I enjoy capturing the colorful streets and historic architecture that reflect everyday life and attract many tourists.

× Actually yes, I really into taking pictures, especially beautiful like uh, pictures.

✓ Actually yes, I'm really into taking pictures, especially beautiful ones.

The sentence omits the verb 'be' before the adjective phrase; 'really into' requires a subject + 'be' + 'into' + noun/gerund. Also 'beautiful like uh, pictures' is awkward; use the noun 'ones' to refer back to 'pictures'. Suggestion: include the correct form of 'to be' (I'm) and replace the awkward phrase with 'beautiful ones'.

× I have all I always have a problem with the storage on my phone, on my laptop that every my device is full of that.

✓ I always have a problem with storage on my phone and my laptop because all my devices are full.

Multiple issues: redundant words ('all I always'); incorrect article and word order ('the storage' can be 'storage' without 'the'); 'every my device' is incorrect order and form — use 'all my devices' or 'every device'. Also sentence was run-on; split and reorder for clarity. Suggestion: remove redundant words, correct word order to 'all my devices', and simplify to 'storage on my phone and my laptop'.

× Is I was born and raised in urban areas, I prefer to take pictures and having a beautiful time in rural areas and it's like being near to the real nature and being part of this.

✓ I was born and raised in an urban area, so I prefer to take pictures and spend pleasant time in rural areas; it feels like being close to nature and being part of it.

Beginning 'Is I' is incorrect; use 'I was'. 'Urban areas' vs 'an urban area' — use singular for birthplace. 'Prefer to take pictures and having' mixes infinitive and -ing; keep parallel forms: 'prefer to take pictures and spend'. 'Being near to the real nature' is unidiomatic; use 'close to nature' and 'part of it'. Suggestion: remove 'Is', ensure parallel verb forms, choose idiomatic prepositions and articles, and break long sentence for clarity.

× Yeah, actually I prefer using my own country and it's not like, uh, secret that, uh, there are a lot of number of tourists, You can see this, uh, streets, uh, in every like region of Uzbekistan.

✓ Yeah, actually I prefer my own country, and it's not a secret that there are a large number of tourists; you can see these streets in almost every region of Uzbekistan.

'Prefer using my own country' is odd; say 'prefer my own country' or 'prefer to stay in my own country'. 'A lot of number of tourists' is ungrammatical; use 'a large number of tourists' or 'a lot of tourists'. Capitalization 'You' mid-sentence is wrong. 'This streets' should be 'these streets' to match plural. 'Every like region' is informal and incorrect; use 'almost every region' or 'every region'. Suggestion: correct collocations ('a large number of', 'these streets'), plural demonstrative, and preposition/word choice for natural phrasing.