Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and fluent: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct grammar (e.g., 'I like to take photos and videos for memories'), and limit to about 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about what you enjoy about those views to make your answer more vivid.

Example: Yes, I love photographing different views. I’m a nature lover, so I often take photos and videos of mountains, forests and rivers to capture peaceful moments. For example, I enjoy photographing misty mountain mornings because the light and atmosphere make each picture unique.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words for coherence. Correct informal phrases (e.g., 'I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded') and give one concrete reason or example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded. In the countryside I can enjoy fresh air and peaceful scenery, for example sitting by a river and listening to birds, which helps me relax.

Suggestion: Make a clear, grammatically correct statement and avoid repetition. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'Nepal is known for its landscapes, culture and natural beauty') and give one specific example of a view or place. Keep the answer within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in my own country, Nepal, because it has stunning mountain landscapes and rich culture. For instance, I love the views around the Annapurna region where snow-capped peaks and terraced fields create beautiful scenes.

× I as I'm a nature person, I like to click, uh, videos, photos for the memory.

✓ As I'm a nature person, I like to take videos and photos for memories.

Incorrect pronoun/phrase placement and wording: 'I as I'm a nature person' is awkward and ungrammatical; use 'As I'm a nature person' to introduce reason. 'Click' is informal and typically used for photos only; 'take' is appropriate for both photos and videos. 'for the memory' should be plural 'for memories' or 'to remember' to be natural. Suggestion: start with 'As' to link reason, use 'take' and pluralize 'memories' or use 'to remember'.

× Uh, I like to take photos, videos of mountains, forest and rivers, uh, nature, you know, I'm a nature boy.

✓ I like to take photos and videos of mountains, forests, rivers and nature; I'm a nature person.

Parallel noun forms and word choice: 'forest' should be plural 'forests' to match 'mountains' and 'rivers' (plural coordination). Use 'and' between 'photos and videos' for clarity. 'Nature boy' is informal and potentially odd; 'nature person' or 'someone who loves nature' is more appropriate. Suggestion: keep parallel plurals and use clearer phrasing.

× I prefer using rural areas 'cause it, uh, rural areas are uh, far from chaos.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are far from chaos.

Incorrect preposition and redundant structure: 'prefer using rural areas' is unnatural; use 'prefer rural areas'. 'Cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. Also 'it, rural areas are' is ungrammatical; replace with 'they are' to agree with plural subject. Suggestion: use 'prefer' + noun phrase and ensure subject-pronoun agreement.

× So there is peace and so there is good oxygen level also.

✓ So there is peace and a good level of oxygen as well.

Article and noun phrase structure: 'good oxygen level' needs an article and more natural phrasing: 'a good level of oxygen' or 'good air quality'. Also avoid repeating 'so there is'; combine ideas for fluency. Suggestion: use 'there is' once and a natural noun phrase.

× So while watching the view you can feel the view also.

✓ While looking at the view, you can also feel relaxed and connected to nature.

Repetition and vague expression: sentence repeats 'view' and 'feel the view' is unclear. Improve sentence structure by specifying what 'feel' means (e.g., relaxed, peaceful, connected to nature). Suggestion: avoid repetition and clarify the sensation experienced.

× I prefer views on my own country rather than other countries as my country is Nepal.

✓ I prefer views in my own country rather than in other countries because my country is Nepal.

Preposition misuse: use 'in' with 'country' ('views in my country'), not 'on'. Also use 'because' instead of 'as' for clarity in speech and include 'in other countries' for parallel structure. Suggestion: ensure prepositions match collocations ('in a country').

× Nepal is basically Nepal is basically known for the abuse and culture and nature.

✓ Nepal is basically known for its culture and natural beauty.

Redundancy and wrong word choice: repeated phrase 'Nepal is basically' and 'abuse' is incorrect and likely a misuse for 'culture' or 'heritage'; 'abuse' is inappropriate. Replace with 'culture' and 'natural beauty' and use possessive 'its'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and choose accurate vocabulary; 'known for its culture and natural beauty' is concise.

× So Nepal have many views and nature.

✓ Nepal has many beautiful views and a rich natural environment.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Nepal' (singular proper noun) requires 'has', not 'have'. Also improve noun phrases: 'views and nature' is vague; expand to 'beautiful views and a rich natural environment'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with singular subjects and enrich nouns for clarity.

× So I've seen many views and nature so.

✓ So I have seen many beautiful sights and natural places.

Awkward ending and word choice: trailing 'so' is unnecessary. 'Views and nature' is vague; 'sights and natural places' or 'scenic views and natural landscapes' is clearer. Suggestion: remove redundant 'so' and use clearer nouns to express experiences.