Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and slightly more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating similar words, correct small grammar issues, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel or go for a walk I often photograph city skylines and natural landscapes, because they help me remember places and relax.

Suggestion: Be concise and correct hesitations/filler words. Use a clear topic sentence, link reasons with a connector, and provide a concrete detail or short example. Avoid vocalized hesitations like “UH” and awkward phrasing such as “natures” and “greens.”

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I grew up in the countryside, so I find rolling fields and dense trees more relaxing. For instance, I love photographing local farms and tree-lined paths when I visit my hometown.

Suggestion: Provide a direct topic sentence first, then give a brief reason and a specific example. Replace vague words like “greeneries” with “green landscapes” or “natural scenery,” and avoid repeating similar adjectives.

Example: It depends, but I generally prefer natural scenery abroad because different countries offer unique landscapes. For example, I felt very relaxed photographing alpine meadows in Switzerland, which were quite different from the forests near my home.

× Yes, I take a lot of pictures like city view and nature view when I travel or taking a walk.

✓ Yes, I take a lot of pictures of city views and natural scenery when I travel or take a walk.

Article and noun form errors: 'city view' and 'nature view' are unidiomatic and need plural/specific forms; use of 'nature' as adjective is incorrect. Also parallel verb forms: 'when I travel or taking a walk' mixes base form with -ing. Use 'take a walk' to match 'travel'. Suggestion: use 'of' after 'pictures' to show what is pictured, pluralize 'view' to 'views', and use 'natural scenery' for idiomatic English. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban areas because I was born and raised in a rather rural area, so I'm fond of the UH natures and greens flourishing alongside UH.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban ones because I was born and raised in a rather rural area, so I'm fond of the natural landscapes and greenery flourishing there.

Word choice and noun form errors and awkward placeholders: 'urban areas' vs 'urban ones' improves parallelism; 'UH' appears to be filler and should be removed; 'natures' is incorrect — use 'natural landscapes' or 'nature'; 'greens' is unidiomatic, use 'greenery'. Also 'flourishing alongside UH' is unclear; replace with 'flourishing there' to refer back to the rural area. Tense is consistent (prefer/past born and raised), so main fixes are articles, noun forms, and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:17

× That depends on the views you're seeing, but in general I like seeing nature and greeneries in other countries too.

✓ That depends on the views you see, but in general I like seeing nature and greenery in other countries too.

Verb form and noun choice errors: 'you're seeing' is acceptable but 'you see' is more natural in this general statement. 'Greeneries' is not a standard plural noun; use 'greenery' (uncountable) or 'green spaces'. Also maintain consistent tense and idiomatic expressions. Grammar problem type ID:13

× It makes me feel relaxed and calm.

✓ They make me feel relaxed and calm.

Subject-verb agreement and reference: 'It' refers back to 'nature and greenery' (plural), so use plural pronoun 'They' and keep verb 'make' to agree with plural subject. Alternatively, if referring to 'seeing nature and greenery' as a singular experience, you could say 'It makes me feel relaxed and calm.' But given prior sentence lists plural things, 'They make me...' is clearer. Grammar problem type ID:27