Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you like taking pictures, then give one or two specific reasons with clearer vocabulary and fewer hesitations. Use linking words like 'because' or 'as' to connect ideas. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because I find landscapes and cityscapes inspiring and they motivate me creatively. For example, when I take pictures of a sunrise, it helps me start the day with energy and new ideas.

Suggestion: Answer the choice clearly (urban or rural) first. Then give one or two specific reasons and a contrast if you like. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words such as 'because', 'but' or 'however' to make your point coherent.

Example: I prefer rural views because they feel peaceful and show natural landscapes that contrast with my busy city life. For instance, open fields and quiet rivers help me relax and notice details I miss in the crowded city.

Suggestion: Give a direct preference and a brief, specific reason. If you mention UNESCO or recognition, state it clearly and link it to why you prefer those views. Reduce hedging phrases like 'I think' and avoid repetitions.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because many sites here are officially recognised for their beauty, such as several UNESCO-protected areas. That recognition shows these places are special and worth visiting, so I usually choose local scenery.

× Oh, absolutely. I have a, uh, like in ours, ambitious about doing this because, you know, I've really like being inspired by this field. So I want to capture this to motivate me in, uh, my life.

✓ Oh, absolutely. I am ambitious about doing this because I am really inspired by this field, so I want to capture these scenes to motivate me in my life.

The original contains several sentence structure problems: awkward phrases ('I have a, uh, like in ours'), incorrect verb forms ('I've really like being inspired'), and unclear noun references. I corrected 'I have a... ambitious' to the grammatical 'I am ambitious', changed 'I've really like being inspired' to 'I am really inspired' for correct tense and verb usage, and adjusted 'this' to 'these scenes' to match the plural idea of pictures. Suggestion: simplify clauses, use subject + correct form of be + adjective (I am ambitious), and use clear nouns for what you capture (scenes, views, photos).

× I'm a big fan of this field because it's give me a sense of, uh, trend pro and maybe you can like give me another view of the, uh, life like, you know, it's will contrast with their view in my like crowded city.

✓ I'm a big fan of this field because it gives me a sense of trend and may give me another view of life; you know, it will contrast with the view in my crowded city.

Errors include incorrect verb agreement ('it's give' should be 'it gives'), incorrect modal/auxiliary use ('it's will' should be 'it will'), and unclear pronouns ('their view' incorrectly refers to unspecified people). I replaced 'trend pro' with 'trend' because original is unclear. Suggestions: ensure the subject and verb agree in number and person (it + gives), avoid combining contractions with modal verbs (it will, not it's will), and use clear possessive references (the view in my crowded city).

× I think it will depends on some location and uh, like the countries, but umm, I think that the view in my country is pretty good and you know, it has like quick have be recognised as their like, uh, by the UNESCO. So I think it's prefer I prefer in my country.

✓ I think it depends on the location and the country, but I think that the views in my country are pretty good and have been recognised by UNESCO. So I prefer them in my country.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: 'it will depends' mixes future modal with present verb; correct is 'it depends'. 'the view... is pretty good' changed to plural 'views... are' to match context. 'it has like quick have be recognised' is ungrammatical; correct passive present perfect is 'have been recognised'. Also 'it's prefer I prefer' is wrong; use 'I prefer'. Suggestions: use simple present for general statements (it depends), match plural nouns with plural verbs, and form passive perfect with 'have/has been' + past participle.