Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và thay đổi từ vựng để tự nhiên hơn. Cụ thể: sửa lỗi danh từ đếm được/không đếm được (picture → pictures), thêm mạo từ khi cần (the nature → nature hoặc the clouds), và tránh dùng câu quá ngắn; mở rộng bằng 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể về lý do hoặc ví dụ. Ngoài ra chú ý phát âm của từ như "clouds" và "space".

Example: Yes, I do. I really enjoy taking pictures of nature, especially clouds and green landscapes, because the changing light and shapes always inspire me.

Suggestion: Sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, đồng thời làm câu mạch lạc bằng cách dùng từ nối hợp lý. Cụ thể: "refer" và "fascinated" sai trật từ — nên dùng "prefer" và "am fascinated" hoặc "find"; giảm lặp từ (fresh fresh) và chia câu hợp lý. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về hoạt động bạn làm ở nông thôn để câu rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because I enjoy open spaces and fresh air; for example, I like walking or working in parks where it’s peaceful and there’s no traffic pollution.

Suggestion: Cần cải thiện tính mạch lạc, ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt ý rõ ràng. Tránh dùng cụm từ sai ("great way chance"), chia thì đúng ("I always feel"), sửa số ít/ số nhiều ("my country" not "my countries"), và dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng khi thể hiện dự định ("I would like to visit Tokyo"). Nên trả lời trực tiếp trước rồi giải thích lý do và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về điều bạn muốn thấy ở nước ngoài.

Example: I love my country and feel a strong connection to it, but if I had to choose I would prefer views in other countries because I’d love to visit Tokyo to see its modern skyline and beautiful gardens.

× I really love taking picture of the nature, especially the cloud and green space.

✓ I really love taking pictures of nature, especially clouds and green spaces.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because it refers to taking multiple photos (singular/plural issue). 'The nature' is uncountable so 'nature' without 'the' is correct; 'the cloud' and 'green space' should be plural ('clouds' and 'green spaces') to match the general sense. Suggestion: use plural forms for general, countable items and omit 'the' with uncountable nouns like 'nature'.

× I refer the rural areas more than urban areas, mostly because I fascinated by the open space like working in the park or enjoy the fresh fresh air without any smoke.

✓ I prefer rural areas more than urban areas, mostly because I am fascinated by open spaces, like working in a park, and enjoying the fresh air without any smoke.

'Refer' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prefer' (choice preference). 'I fascinated' lacks the auxiliary 'am' for third person singular conjugation pattern with 'I' requires 'am' for the adjective 'fascinated' (though this is a copular construction, not third person singular—still requires 'am'). Use plural 'open spaces' for general places. Parallel structure: 'working in a park and enjoying the fresh air' keeps verb forms consistent. Also remove repeated 'fresh'. Suggestion: use 'prefer', include the correct auxiliary verbs and maintain parallel verb forms.

× I always feels the closeness between me and my countries.

✓ I always feel a closeness to my country.

'Feels' is wrong with subject 'I' (should be 'feel' — subject-verb agreement; this could also be ID 27 but here focus on pronoun use). 'Between me and my countries' is incorrect pronoun and plural use: 'between' typically compares two entities, and 'my countries' is wrong when referring to a single country. Better: 'a closeness to my country' or 'a closeness between me and my country'. Suggestion: use 'feel' with 'I' and correct noun number and preposition.

× But if you ask me to choose, I gonna choose.

✓ But if you asked me to choose, I would choose.

'I gonna choose' is informal and ungrammatical. For a hypothetical present conditional, use the second conditional: 'If you asked me, I would choose.' 'Gonna' is colloquial contraction of 'going to' and does not fit this conditional. Suggestion: use proper conditional structures: 'If you asked me, I would choose.'

× One day I will come. I will visit the Tokyo in Japan.

✓ One day I will come. I will visit Tokyo in Japan.

Use of the definite article 'the' before 'Tokyo' is incorrect; city names generally do not take 'the'. 'Tokyo in Japan' is redundant but acceptable; better: 'visit Tokyo in Japan' or simply 'visit Tokyo.' Suggestion: omit 'the' before city names and avoid unnecessary articles.