Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap doğal ama dil bilgisi hataları ve gereksiz tekrarlar var. Cümle yapısını düzeltin (ör. 'like to take' yerine). Konuyu doğrudan belirtilen bir başlangıç cümlesiyle cevaplayın, ardından nedenlerini kısa ve spesifik örneklerle destekleyin. En fazla 3-4 kısa cümle kullanın ve gereksiz ifadeleri çıkarın.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it relaxes me and helps me notice small details. For example, when I walk by the river I often photograph reflections and textures. I usually use my phone and prefer natural light for the best results.

Suggestion: Cevap belirsiz ve dil bilgisi hataları çok. Tercihi açıkça ifade edin ('I prefer urban views' veya 'rural views') ve nedenini mantıklı sebeplerle destekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak sebep-sonuç ilişkisi kurun (e.g. 'because', 'so'). Gereksiz kelimeleri ve 'umm' gibi dolgu ifadelerini çıkarın.

Example: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the variety of architecture and busy streets. The city offers interesting contrasts between old and new buildings, so I always find new details to photograph. Living here also makes it easy to explore different neighborhoods.

Suggestion: Cevap kısa ve belirsiz; ayrıca dilbilgisi hatası var ('they will perfect' yanlış). Net bir görüş belirtin (örneğin 'I like both') ve her birini neden sevdiğinizi kısa, özgün örneklerle açıklayın. Bağlaçlarla fikirleri birbirine bağlayın.

Example: I like views in both my own country and abroad because each offers something different. In my country I appreciate familiar landmarks and traditions, while other countries show new landscapes and architectural styles that inspire me. Traveling abroad often gives me fresh ideas for composition.

× Well, yes, I like to taking pictures of different views because this makes me happy and I like it.

✓ Well, yes, I like taking pictures of different views because this makes me happy.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the base verb with -ing (gerund) or the infinitive without 'to'. 'Like to taking' mixes 'to' and the -ing form, which is incorrect. Use 'like taking' or 'like to take'. The repeated 'and I like it' is redundant given the earlier clause, so it is removed for clarity.

× I don't know anybody.

✓ I don't know anyone here.

'I don't know anybody' is grammatically correct but contextually odd after saying they enjoy taking pictures. Likely intended meaning is they don't know people here, so 'anyone here' clarifies meaning. If the student meant they know no one at all, the original is acceptable; this suggestion improves clarity and relevance to the conversation.

× Actually I prefer we have only urban because umm, city comes from.

✓ Actually I prefer urban areas because the city is familiar to me.

The original sentence uses 'we have only urban' and 'city comes from', which are ungrammatical and unclear. Replacing with 'I prefer urban areas' corrects the structure. 'Because the city is familiar to me' expresses the intended reason more naturally. This fixes conjunction and clause linking problems and improves coherence.

× Your city is special for me because I live it here, so I will.

✓ This city is special to me because I live here, so I prefer it.

'Your city' is odd when speaking about the student's own preference; 'this city' or 'my city' fits better. 'I live it here' is incorrect: English uses 'live' intransitively ('I live here'), not with an object. 'So I will' is incomplete; 'so I prefer it' completes the thought. The corrections address pronoun choice and verb usage.

× Actually both because they will perfect.

✓ Actually both, because they are perfect.

'They will perfect' incorrectly uses 'will' with an adjective—'perfect' is an adjective, not a verb here. The present simple 'they are perfect' correctly describes that views in both places are perfect. If future meaning was intended, context doesn't require it; present simple is natural here.