Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, correct grammar, and more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, fix verb forms, and give one or two specific details (what kinds of views, why they appeal). Use linking words if adding details.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like landscapes and cityscapes because they capture unique colors and moods. I collect my best shots and upload them to my social media so friends can see my work.

Suggestion: Answer directly, remove hesitations, and ensure content matches choice (student said urban but mentioned mountains). Provide a clear reason and a specific example. Keep to 1–3 sentences and use linking words like because or for example.

Example: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural scenery such as mountains and lakes. For example, visiting the foothills lets me photograph peaceful landscapes and changing light throughout the day.

Suggestion: Clarify vocabulary (use 'views' not 'wheels'), give a clear topic sentence, and support it with specific reasons and an example. Avoid vague statements and correct grammar (plural/singular, articles).

Example: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal has diverse natural scenery, like the Himalayas and terraced hills. For instance, I enjoy photographing sunrise over mountain ridges near my village, which I can't easily find elsewhere.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of different views because I love measures and I love to taking different views of pictures and I collect them and I upload on my social account.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I love memories and I love taking different kinds of pictures; I collect them and upload them to my social account.

The verb 'like' is followed by the base form with -ing (gerund), so 'like taking' is correct rather than 'like to taking' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Love to taking' should be 'love taking'. Also 'measures' seems incorrect in context and 'memories' fits better; 'different views of pictures' is awkward so 'different kinds of pictures' is clearer. Use 'upload them to my social account' for correct preposition and pronoun reference (also addresses preposition/pronoun issues but only corrected within allowed types).

× Umm, I prefer, uh, views in urban areas, uh, because I like, umm, the views of umm, mountains and uh, there are different uh, visiting place to take uh, new pictures, so I prefer views in.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I like mountain views, and there are many places to visit to take new pictures, so I prefer urban views.

The original has incomplete sentence ending and many disfluencies; restructure for clarity (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'Views of mountains' is fine as 'mountain views'; 'visiting place' should be 'places to visit' (word order). Removed filler words and completed the final clause 'so I prefer urban views' to avoid sentence fragment.

× I prefer wheels in my own country because I love my country and in Nepal there are many place to visit and view the nature. So I think in my country I prefer to be used.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I love my country, and in Nepal there are many places to visit and enjoy nature. So I think I prefer my country for taking pictures.

'Wheels' appears to be a wrong word; context requires 'views' (this is a lexical/pronoun error mapped here as incorrect use of pronouns/words, Grammar Problem Type 12). 'Many place' should be plural 'many places' (singular/plural issue but corrected here within allowed types). 'View the nature' is unnatural; use 'enjoy nature'. The final clause 'I prefer to be used' is ungrammatical and was replaced with 'I prefer my country for taking pictures' to convey intended meaning clearly.