Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and provide one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if needed. For example, correct grammar (photos, take pictures of), shorten phrasing (to preserve memories), and add a brief example of what you photograph.

Example: Yes, I do. I love taking photos of different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset or quiet village scenes when I travel, so I can remember how the place looked and felt.

Suggestion: Answer directly with correct vocabulary and clearer supporting details. Use a linking phrase to explain your reason. Correct phrases (prefer, rural areas, peaceful) and avoid unclear expressions like 'get up on the right field.' Give a specific example of what you like about rural views.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel peaceful and relaxing. For example, I enjoy seeing wide fields and low hills in the morning, when the air is fresh and there are fewer people around.

Suggestion: Make your main point clear and use accurate vocabulary. State directly that you prefer views in your country, then give one concrete reason with correct words (scenery, variety, friendly). Avoid repetition and unclear words like 'sensories' and 'since.' Provide a brief specific example of a local view you like.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because the scenery is very diverse and familiar. For example, I love photographing the coastal cliffs and small fishing villages at dusk, which feel comfortable and full of local character.

× I'm a big fan of taking photo and I often take pictures about different views because I think I can save the memory of the real life.

✓ I'm a big fan of taking photos and I often take pictures of different views because I think I can save memories of real life.

Use the plural form 'photos' for countable noun and the correct preposition 'of' with 'take pictures of'. 'Save the memory of the real life' is unnatural; use plural 'memories' and omit the article before 'real life'. Suggestions: use 'photos', 'take pictures of', and 'save memories of real life'.

× I'm a big fan of taking photo and I often take pictures about different views because I think I can save the memory of the real life.

✓ I'm a big fan of taking photos and I often take pictures of different views because I think I can save memories of real life.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' when speaking generally. Also 'memory' should be plural 'memories' when referring to multiple experiences. Suggestion: use plural forms for general habits and countable nouns.

× I often take pictures about different views

✓ I often take pictures of different views

The correct preposition with 'take pictures' is 'of' not 'about'. Use 'take pictures of' to indicate the object being photographed.

× I think I can save the memory of the real life.

✓ I think I can save memories of real life.

Use simple present 'think' correctly but the noun phrase was incorrect; 'save memories' is more natural. Also omit 'the' before 'real life' in this general meaning. Suggestion: say 'save memories of real life'.

× I refer the scenery in rural areas.

✓ I prefer the scenery in rural areas.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect here; 'prefer' expresses choice. Also include definite article 'the' before 'scenery' to refer to that type of view. Suggestion: use 'prefer the scenery in rural areas'.

× A simple reason go to the fact that I find it's peaceful and happy when I get up on the right field.

✓ A simple reason is that I find it peaceful and pleasant when I wake up in the countryside.

'Go to the fact' is incorrect; use 'is that'. 'Find it's' should be 'find it'. 'Happy' describes people, not places — use 'pleasant' or 'peaceful'. 'Get up on the right field' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'wake up in the countryside' or 'in the field'. Also tense: keep simple present for habitual feeling. Suggestion: 'A simple reason is that I find it peaceful and pleasant when I wake up in the countryside.'

× when I get up on the right field

✓ when I wake up in the countryside

Use 'in' rather than 'on' for being within an area. 'Right field' is unclear; 'countryside' or 'out in the fields' is natural. Also use 'wake up' rather than 'get up on'.

× Well, I'm so into views in my own country, a simple reason go to the fact that I feel my country has a lot of sensories and the beautiful in my country is friendly, friendly and since.

✓ Well, I'm really into views in my own country. A simple reason is that I feel my country has a lot of scenery and that its beauty is friendly and sincere.

Use 'really into' instead of 'so into' for naturalness. 'A simple reason go to the fact' should be 'A simple reason is that'. 'Sensories' is incorrect; use 'scenery'. 'The beautiful in my country' should be 'its beauty'. 'Friendly, friendly and since' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'friendly and sincere'. Maintain present tense and correct noun forms. Suggestions: split into two sentences for clarity and use 'scenery' and 'beauty'.

× the beautiful in my country is friendly, friendly and since

✓ its beauty is friendly and sincere

'Beautiful' is an adjective; the noun 'beauty' is needed here. Repeating 'friendly' is redundant and 'since' is incorrect; likely 'sincere' was intended. Suggestion: use 'its beauty is friendly and sincere' or better 'people are friendly and sincere'.

× the beautiful in my country is friendly, friendly and since

✓ its beauty is friendly and sincere

Use the possessive pronoun 'its' to refer to 'my country' and the noun 'beauty' rather than adjective 'beautiful'. This makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.