Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and use correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., “different views” repeated) and fix article and plural forms (a picture, different sides). Add a short reason or example to make it specific.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially from mountainsides. For example, when I hike I like to photograph valleys and forests because the light and colors change throughout the day. These scenes make my photos look dramatic and memorable.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, moreover). Correct word choice (“seize view” → “see the view”) and avoid filler sounds. Be careful with pronouns and repetition.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because you can see natural features like trees and mountains clearly. For example, when I visit the countryside I often spot birds and other wildlife, which makes the scenery more peaceful and interesting.

Suggestion: Give a brief, direct answer and support it with specific details. Avoid redundancy and tighten grammar (e.g., “see views” not “see view”; remove repeated phrases). You can mention a reason and a short example or a hope to travel in future to show more language range.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I haven’t traveled abroad yet and our landscapes are very diverse. For instance, we have many mountains and forests where I enjoy hiking and taking photos; I hope to see international views in the future.

× From the mountainside you can see many views, so I like to take in different picture from different side different views.

✓ From the mountainside you can see many views, so I like to take different pictures from different sides.

Errors: incorrect singular/plural forms ('picture' -> 'pictures', 'side' -> 'sides') and unnecessary preposition 'in' after 'take'. Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and use the verb 'take' directly with the object. Suggestion: use 'different pictures' and 'from different sides' to match plural meaning.

× It looks so good as well as so amazing to click the picture with views.

✓ It looks so good and amazing to take pictures of the views.

Errors: awkward conjunction 'as well as' and incorrect verb 'click the picture' which is unnatural in this context; use 'take pictures of the views'. Also 'with views' is incorrect prepositional use. Suggestion: use 'so good and amazing' and 'take pictures of the views'.

× I prefer views from rural areas just because we can clearly seize view from rural area as well as we can see, uh, different trees, mountains as well as, and lots of animals, birds.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because we can clearly see the scenery there, including many trees, mountains and lots of animals and birds.

Errors: 'seize view' is incorrect collocation; 'see the scenery' is appropriate. Missing articles: 'rural area' -> 'rural areas' or 'there'. Repetition and filler words removed. Suggestion: use 'see the scenery' and include articles and plural forms where needed.

× So we can clearly see you from rural areas.

✓ So we can clearly see the views in rural areas.

Error: incorrect pronoun 'you' used instead of 'the views' or 'them'. Suggestion: replace 'you' with 'the views' to correctly refer to what is seen.

× I haven't visited other countries yet, so I prefer to see view from my own country.

✓ I haven't visited other countries yet, so I prefer to see views from my own country.

Errors: singular 'view' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally. Tense is fine. Suggestion: use plural 'views' to match general reference.

× From my own country you can see some beautiful, amazing views because in my country there are so many mountains as well as so many forests.

✓ In my country you can see many beautiful views because there are so many mountains and forests.

Errors: redundant 'my own country' repeated and awkward 'as well as so many'. Simplify and use plural nouns. Suggestion: use 'In my country' and combine 'mountains and forests'.

× So we can enjoy from my own country, so I can.

✓ So we can enjoy them in my country, so I prefer that.

Errors: awkward structure and missing object; 'enjoy from my own country' is incorrect. Suggestion: specify the object 'them' (the views) and state preference clearly: 'I prefer that.'