Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap net değil ve çok tekrar/tereddüt içeriyor. Konu cümlesi eksik, destekleyici detaylar belirsiz. Düzeltme için: kısa ve açık bir konu cümlesi kullanın, gereksiz tekrarları atın, ve 1–2 spesifik örnek verin. Ayrıca ara sözcükleri (umm, uh) azaltın ve cümleleri bağlamak için basit bağlaçlar kullanın (for example, because, and).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love exploring new places. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and mountain landscapes when I travel, which helps me capture the unique colours and moods of each location.

Suggestion: Cevap kısa ve etkisiz; gerekçe yüzeysel ve yarım kalmış. Konu cümlesinde net tercih belirtin, ardından sebeplerinizi 1–2 açık ve özgün destekleyici detayla açıklayın. Bağlaçlarla mantığı güçlendirin (because, so, and). Gereksiz duraklamaları kaldırın.

Example: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy peace and natural scenery. For example, I like walking in the countryside where there are fewer cars, more trees, and calmer sounds, which helps me relax and take better photos.

Suggestion: Cevap anlaşılmaz ve dağınık; fikir tamamlanmamış. Önce açık bir tercih veya her iki seçeneğin kıyaslamasını yapın, sonra nedenlerini spesifik örneklerle verin. Gereksiz duraksama ve anlamsız kelime tekrarlarından kaçının. 2–3 cümleyle doğrudan ve mantıklı bir cevap oluşturun.

Example: Both my country and other countries have beautiful views, but I prefer visiting other countries for variety. For instance, travelling abroad has allowed me to see architecture and landscapes that I don't find at home, such as alpine villages or tropical coastlines, which broaden my photographic subjects.

× Actually, I like, uh, taking, uh, taking pictures, different views because, uh, I love the, uh, different, uh, places and uh. The the different, uh, photo, the natural.

✓ Actually, I like taking pictures of different views because I love natural places and scenery.

The original sentence contains repetitions, false starts and fragmented phrases that make the structure unclear. Simplify and combine ideas into a single coherent sentence: use the verb phrase 'like taking pictures of' plus the noun phrase 'different views' and a clear reason clause 'because I love natural places and scenery.' Avoid fillers ('uh') and repeated words. Use preposition 'of' with 'pictures' to indicate what is being photographed.

× I think I prefer uh, uh, rural, rural areas because, uh, I am a natural person. And I am a umm, I am a.

✓ I think I prefer rural areas because I like nature.

The original contains repetition and incomplete clause ('I am a...'). Replace awkward phrase 'I am a natural person' with the natural-sounding 'I like nature.' Remove filler sounds and repeated words. Keep the sentence concise: 'I prefer rural areas because I like nature.' This corrects sentence clarity and completes the thought.

× Actually, my country is uh, beautiful, Umm, the, umm, the other, uh, countries than the other countries, uh, but I love, uh, I love uh. Cash with me Siviram the other country is.

✓ Actually, my country is beautiful, and other countries are different, but I also like visiting other countries.

The original is fragmented, contains many fillers and unclear phrases ('Cash with me Siviram' appears to be nonstandard or mispronounced). Reconstruct the intended meaning: compare home country with other countries and express liking for visiting them. Use conjunction 'and' or 'but' to connect clauses and avoid repetitions. Ensure each clause has a clear subject and verb (e.g., 'my country is beautiful' and 'I also like visiting other countries').