Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần sửa ngữ pháp, phát âm và làm rõ ý. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn. Tránh dùng cụm từ sai như "don't taking" và "offense". Hãy nói: "No, I don't take pictures often," hoặc nếu có thói quen, nêu tần suất cụ thể và lý do. Thêm liên từ nếu mở rộng ý (e.g., "because", "so").

Example: No, I don't take pictures often because I usually enjoy the moment rather than photographing it. However, when I travel I sometimes take photos to remember special places.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp (số nhiều, mạo từ) và kết cấu câu để tự nhiên hơn. Nên có câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "since" và mô tả cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: "skyscrapers, street lights, busy streets"). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Example: I prefer urban views because I love the energy of the city. For example, the skyscrapers, colorful lights and busy streets create an exciting atmosphere that I enjoy photographing.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng cần chỉnh ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt. Tránh lặp từ như "so so" và sửa thì động từ ("I am really enjoyed" → "I really enjoy"). Bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rồi nêu ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: beaches, rice terraces, architecture) để tăng tính thuyết phục. Giữ 2–3 câu.

Example: I prefer the views in my own country, Vietnam, because it has diverse landscapes. For instance, the beaches, rice terraces and historic towns offer unique and beautiful scenes that I especially enjoy.

× Actually, I don't taking picture offense often.

✓ Actually, I don't take pictures of often.

The error is using 'don't' with a present participle 'taking'. After 'do/does' use the base form of the verb (take). Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' for general activity, and the phrase 'of(f)ense' is incorrect here — likely meant 'often'. Correct sentence: 'Actually, I don't take pictures often.' Suggestion: Use 'do not' + base verb, pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally, and place adverb 'often' at end or before main verb ('I often take pictures').

× I prefer view in urban areas because I love the view of the city.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I love the view of the city.

The noun 'view' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally about types of scenes. Use plural after 'prefer' when referring to multiple scenes. Keep 'the view of the city' as a specific instance. Suggestion: Use plural for general countable nouns (views).

× The dynamic views of light and building around me.

✓ I enjoy the dynamic views of lights and buildings around me.

This fragment lacks a main verb and has singular nouns that should be plural. It should be a complete sentence with a subject and verb (e.g., 'I enjoy') and plural forms 'lights' and 'buildings' to match 'views'. Suggestion: Ensure each sentence has a subject and verb and use plural forms for multiple items.

× Well I was born in Vietnam and I believe Vietnam has one of the most beautiful views in the world.

✓ Well, I was born in Vietnam, and I believe Vietnam has some of the most beautiful views in the world.

The original is mostly correct but 'one of the most beautiful views' is acceptable; however 'one of the' requires singular countable noun following; using 'some of the most beautiful views' sounds more natural. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'some of the' when referring to multiple examples among many.

× So so basically I am really enjoyed the sight and the view in Vietnam.

✓ So basically I really enjoy the sights and the views in Vietnam.

The phrase 'I am really enjoyed' incorrectly mixes present continuous auxiliary 'am' with past participle 'enjoyed'. Use simple present 'enjoy' to state a general preference. Also pluralize 'sight' and 'view' to 'sights' and 'views' when speaking generally. Remove repeated 'so'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual or general truths (I enjoy), and pluralize countable nouns when referring to multiple items.