Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant details (like mentioning your car unless it’s relevant), correct grammar, and use linking words if you add reasons. Aim for 2–3 sentences, use proper noun forms (pictures, different views), and correct verb forms.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially clouds, parks and natural scenery. I like capturing these scenes because they change with the weather and often have interesting colours and shapes.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words (because, for example, and). Correct grammar (I prefer rural areas), use singular/plural correctly, and avoid vague phrasing. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they have more natural scenery and open spaces. For example, there are many trees, ponds and farm animals which make the landscape more peaceful and photogenic.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first (I prefer views in my country), then add a specific example with correct grammar and concise details. Use past tense correctly for past trips and clearer vocabulary (e.g., winding streets, cloudy skies, mountain rivers). Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words such as for example or because.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because there are many beautiful landscapes to photograph. For example, when I visited Shimla with friends, I liked the cloudy skies, winding streets and the clear rivers that flow down from the mountains.

× Yes, I would like to take the pics of a different views of the clouds, parks and nature because I have a Tesla and I'm very attracted to this thing and I have fond of it taking a pictures of the different views.

✓ Yes, I would like to take pictures of different views of the clouds, parks, and nature because I have a Tesla and I'm very fond of it; I enjoy taking pictures of different views.

Errors: incorrect articles ('a different views', 'a pictures'), unidiomatic phrases ('attracted to this thing', 'I have fond of it taking a pictures'). Use plural 'pictures' without 'a'. Use 'different views' without 'a'. 'Very fond of' requires 'be' + 'very fond of'. Replace 'attracted to this thing' with 'very fond of it' or 'really like it'. Also improve sentence flow by splitting into two clauses and adding commas.

× Apply for views in rural areas because they are so many nature like views like say are so many trees and the ponds and the houses are so well managed and they are so many animals like cows, dogs which is playing on the streets.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there are so many natural scenes, such as many trees, ponds, and well-kept houses, and there are many animals like cows and dogs playing in the streets.

Errors: 'Apply for views' is incorrect verb choice—use 'I prefer'. 'so many nature like views' wrong preposition/wording—use 'many natural scenes' or 'nature-like views'. 'like say are so many' is ungrammatical. Use 'such as' to list examples. 'which is playing' wrong relative pronoun and verb agreement; use 'playing'. Use 'in the streets' instead of 'on the streets' is acceptable but 'in' fits better with 'playing' here.

× So I would like to prefer the regular ages.

✓ So I would prefer rural areas.

Errors: 'would like to prefer' is redundant; use 'would prefer' or 'prefer'. 'the regular ages' is a misused phrase—probably intended 'rural areas'. Incorrect pronoun/word choice leads to meaning loss. Keep it concise: 'I would prefer rural areas'.

× I prefer views in my country because there are so many views like I have to capture.

✓ I prefer views in my country because there are so many places I want to capture.

Errors: 'like I have to capture' is incorrect tense/structure. Use present simple preference 'I prefer' and 'I want to capture' (present) or 'I would like to capture'. 'Places' is clearer than repeating 'views'.

× Like in Shimla when I was go there with my friends, I think they are so many cloudy and the streets are so WAVY and the mountains are so high that I like to see the views of that and the others thing is I like the most at the river of them coming from the mountains.

✓ For example, in Shimla when I went there with my friends, there were many clouds, the streets were very winding, and the mountains were so high that I enjoyed the views; another thing I like most is the rivers that come from the mountains.

Errors: 'when I was go there' incorrect past form—use 'went'. 'I think they are so many cloudy' wrong subject and tense; use 'there were many clouds'. 'streets are so WAVY' use 'winding' and past tense 'were'. 'I like to see the views of that' awkward—use 'I enjoyed the views'. 'the others thing is I like the most at the river of them coming from the mountains' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'another thing I like most is the rivers that come from the mountains'. Ensure consistent past tense for the past event.