Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep your answer concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., “gives me sauce like beautiful”). Focus on natural expressions and correct verb forms.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories of beautiful places. For example, when I visited a mountain village last year, I photographed the sunrise to remember the colours and peaceful atmosphere.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use clear comparisons. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give specific reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' or 'for instance'). Use correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., 'I prefer rural areas,' 'I can find natural scenery,' 'forests' not 'forest').

Example: I prefer rural areas because they have more natural scenery and wildlife. For example, in the countryside I can find dense forests and many birds, which makes the views calm and picturesque.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and support it with specific, accurate facts. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'because' and 'also') and correct collocations (e.g., 'rich in natural resources', 'beautiful scenery', 'contains the highest peak').

Example: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal is rich in natural resources and has a variety of beautiful scenery. For example, Nepal contains the highest peak in the world, Mount Everest, and many valleys and rivers that create stunning landscapes.

× Yes, I love to taking the pictures of different views because I want to make it like a memory where I went various beautiful places and taking the pictures and it helps me to begin that memory and gives me sauce like beautiful.

✓ Yes, I love to take pictures of different views because I want to create memories of the beautiful places I have visited, and taking pictures helps me remember them and makes those memories more vivid.

The original contains incorrect verb + -ing after 'love to' (should be base form 'take'), repeated and awkward gerund uses ('taking the pictures' and 'taking the pictures and it helps me to begin that memory'), and unclear phrasing ('gives me sauce like beautiful'). Suggestions: use 'love to' + base verb, replace 'make it like a memory' with 'create memories', use present perfect 'I have visited' for past experiences connected to the present, and simplify the clause to 'taking pictures helps me remember them and makes those memories more vivid.'

× I prefer builds of what urban areas and the rural areas especially.

✓ I prefer buildings in urban and rural areas, especially rural ones.

The sentence uses 'builds of what' which is incorrect. Use 'buildings in' to indicate structures located 'in' areas. Also clarify 'especially rural ones' to specify preference. Keep noun 'buildings' plural to match general reference.

× I love rural areas because in those areas I can found natural scenarios such as many forest and others and it consists of beautiful of birds and other natural.

✓ I love rural areas because there I can find natural scenery such as many forests, and they are home to beautiful birds and other wildlife.

Problems: incorrect verb 'found' should be 'find'; 'natural scenarios' is awkward—use 'natural scenery'; 'many forest' needs plural 'forests'; 'it consists of beautiful of birds' incorrect subject and structure—use 'they are home to beautiful birds and other wildlife.' Also replace 'in those areas I can find' with 'there I can find' for conciseness.

× I prefer build in my own country because Nepal is an uh, uh, Nepal comes in a second natural resources of the world and in consist of various beautiful scenarios.

✓ I prefer sights in my own country because Nepal has rich natural resources and many beautiful landscapes.

Issues: 'prefer build' incorrect—use 'prefer sights' or 'prefer views'; 'Nepal comes in a second natural resources of the world' is ungrammatical and unclear—replace with 'Nepal has rich natural resources'; 'in consist of' should be 'consists of' or better 'has' and simplify to 'many beautiful landscapes.' Use present simple 'has' to state facts.

× And it also consists of highest peak, uh, of the world, which is Mount Everest.

✓ It also contains the highest peak in the world, Mount Everest.

Use 'contains' or 'has' instead of 'consists of' when mentioning that a country includes a peak. 'Highest peak of the world' should be 'highest peak in the world.' Remove filler words and redundant commas for clarity.