Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, verb forms and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and limit to 3–4 concise sentences. For example, use correct verb forms (capture → take), plural agreement (gives → give), and natural phrasing (pleasant memories, stored on my phone).

Example: I enjoy taking photos of different views because they create pleasant memories. For example, I often take pictures at scenic spots and later look back at them on my phone to remember how I felt. These photos help me recall specific moments and emotions.

Suggestion: Focus on clear, grammatically correct statements and provide specific reasons with linking words. Use singular/plural correctly (rural area → rural areas) and avoid odd phrases (sense of humor). Offer concrete descriptions (fresh air, open space, landscapes) and compare briefly with urban areas.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because the landscapes are calmer and more natural. For instance, the open fields, fresh air, and quiet rivers make me feel relaxed, whereas city views are often busy and noisy. Therefore, rural scenery helps me unwind and enjoy nature.

Suggestion: Make a direct topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Fix grammar and word choice: say “I prefer the views in my own country,” “it has 28 states,” “a wide variety of cultures and landscapes,” and “it gives me a lot of pleasure.” Keep answers concise and use linking words like because and for example.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes and cultures. For example, with 28 states we have mountains, beaches, and historical towns to explore, so I can see many different kinds of scenery without traveling far. This diversity makes domestic travel more enjoyable for me.

× I like capture pictures of various views at a different stations because they gives me a lot of pleasant memory to stored in my phone.

✓ I like capturing pictures of various views at different stations because they give me a lot of pleasant memories stored on my phone.

The verb after 'like' should use the -ing form ('capturing'). 'a different stations' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'different stations'. 'they gives' has subject-verb agreement error; plural subject 'they' takes 'give'. 'a lot of pleasant memory' should be plural 'pleasant memories'. 'to stored' incorrectly uses infinitive plus past; use past participle 'stored' as an adjective or rephrase; here 'stored on my phone' is correct. Also use 'on my phone' rather than 'in'.

× For instance, I can look back those memory how can I felt at that time.

✓ For instance, I can look back at those memories to remember how I felt at that time.

Missing preposition: 'look back at' is the correct collocation. 'those memory' should be plural 'those memories'. The clause 'how can I felt' mixes question word order and incorrect tense; change to statement order 'how I felt' and use past tense 'felt'. Use 'to remember' to connect ideas clearly.

× Most commonly I prefer views in rural area because it gave me pleasant or happy moment and I can also feel the sense of humor.

✓ Most commonly I prefer views in rural areas because they give me pleasant or happy moments and I can also feel a sense of peace.

Use plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally. 'it gave me' misuses singular pronoun and past tense; use plural 'they give me' to match 'views' and present tense for general preference. 'pleasant or happy moment' should be plural 'pleasant or happy moments'. 'sense of humor' is not appropriate for scenery; likely intended 'sense of peace' or 'serenity'. Adjust phrasing to convey intended meaning.

× The nature of beauty in rural area as compared to urban areas.

✓ The natural beauty in rural areas is greater compared to urban areas.

Original is a fragment lacking a verb. 'The nature of beauty' is awkward; use 'natural beauty'. 'in rural area' should be 'in rural areas'. Add a verb 'is greater' to form a complete sentence and clarify comparison.

× Uh, yes, I prefer views in my own country because my country has 28 States and it variety of and it's full of variety of culture, nature and beauty, so it give me a lot of pleasant.

✓ Uh, yes, I prefer views in my own country because my country has 28 states and it is full of a variety of cultures, natural landscapes, and beauty, so it gives me a lot of pleasure.

Use lowercase 'states' unless proper name. 'it variety of and it's full of variety of' is ungrammatical; use 'it is full of a variety of'. 'culture' should be plural 'cultures' when referring to many types. 'nature' is vague; 'natural landscapes' fits better. 'so it give me' needs subject-verb agreement: 'it gives me'. 'a lot of pleasant' should be 'a lot of pleasure' or 'many pleasant experiences'. Ensure consistent present tense for general preference.