Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için telaffuzu düzeltin, gereksiz dolgu sözcüklerini (örn. “umm”) azaltın ve “breathtaking” sözcüğünün doğru kullanımını sağlayın. Ayrıca kısa bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp 1–2 destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin (neden sevdiğiniz, örnek bir anı).

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially seaside scenes. I find the colors and movement of the sea very calming, and I often try to capture the light at sunset when the sky looks most dramatic.

Suggestion: Cümlenizi daha doğru ve doğal yapmak için dilbilgisini düzeltin (örneğin “so many people” veya “there are many people”) ve daha açıklayıcı destekleyici bilgi verin. Bağlaç kullanarak fikrinizi genişletin (örneğin “because” veya “for example”), ve cümle sayısını 2–3 ile sınırlayın.

Example: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy of city centers. For example, I like watching busy streets and tall buildings, and I often photograph people and architecture to capture the atmosphere.

Suggestion: Daha doğal ve doğru cümleler kurmak için dilbilgisi ve kelime sırasına dikkat edin (örneğin “I prefer views in my own country”). Verilerinizi özgül örneklerle destekleyin: hangi tarihi yerleri veya sahil kentlerini sevdiğinizi söyleyin. Bağlaçlarla nedeninizi netleştirin.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because Turkey has many historical sites and beautiful coastlines. For instance, I love photographing old Ottoman architecture in cities like Istanbul and the clear seas around towns such as Antalya.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, umm especially sea views because the sea views breed breathtaking for me.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, umm especially sea views because the sea views are breathtaking to me.

The error is using the verb 'breed' with the adjective 'breathtaking'. 'Breed' is not appropriate here; the correct linking verb is 'are' to describe a state. Use an adjective after a linking verb (be) to describe a noun. Suggestion: use 'are breathtaking' or 'look breathtaking' to convey the meaning clearly.

× I prefer urban views because I like city centers. There's so much people and I like the view, that's all.

✓ I prefer urban views because I like city centers. There are so many people and I like the view, that's all.

The phrase 'so much people' is incorrect: 'people' is a countable plural noun, so it requires 'many' and plural verb agreement 'are'. Use 'so many people' or 'so much traffic/crowds' depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'There are so many people'.

× I prefer own country views because Turkey is a so historical places and I like going to the place and Turkey have a seaside or city centers.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because Turkey has many historical places, and I like visiting them; Turkey also has seaside resorts and city centers.

Multiple issues: 'own country views' is unnatural—use 'views in my own country'. 'Turkey is a so historical places' mixes singular 'is' with plural 'places' and misuses 'so'; correct is 'Turkey has many historical places'. 'I like going to the place' is vague—use 'visiting them'. 'Turkey have' is wrong subject-verb agreement; 'Turkey' (singular) takes 'has'. Overall, restructure the sentence for clarity and correct grammar. Suggestions: use 'views in my own country', 'Turkey has many historical places', 'I like visiting them', and correct verb agreement 'Turkey has'.