Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce repetition and hesitation, use a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific details with linking words. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and avoid filler sounds.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes such as mountains, rivers and trees because each scene has a different mood. For example, I often capture clouds at sunset since their colours and shapes change dramatically, which makes the photos more striking.

Suggestion: Answer directly with one clear reason, avoid contradictions (urban vs rural confusion) and remove repetition and hesitations. Use linking words to structure supporting details and give one specific example.

Example: I prefer rural areas because the natural scenery is calmer and greener. For instance, I visit my grandparents’ village regularly, where I can photograph quiet tree-lined paths and clear skies that are rare in the city.

Suggestion: Give a concise direct answer, reduce hesitations, and add a concrete reason and one specific example with a linking phrase. Use natural vocabulary (e.g., "coastlines", "scenery").

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I still have many places left to explore. For example, I want to visit the beaches of Goa and Kerala to photograph their dramatic coastlines and colourful sunsets.

× I like taking picture of different views, uh, like mountains, Riverside and uh, some trees pictures, cloud pictures.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, such as mountains, riversides, trees, and clouds.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match the plural idea 'different views'. 'Riverside' as a common noun in this list should be pluralized to 'riversides' (or 'riverside scenes'); 'trees pictures' and 'cloud pictures' are awkward — use 'trees' and 'clouds' or 'pictures of trees and clouds'. Improve parallelism by using 'such as' and listing nouns consistently. Suggestions: pluralize countable nouns when referring to multiple items and keep parallel structure in lists.

× I'm really fond of taking pictures of clouds because I find them, uh, really beautiful.

✓ I'm really fond of taking pictures of clouds because I find them very beautiful.

Using 'really' twice in close succession is stylistically weak; replace the second 'really' with 'very' for variety. This is primarily a stylistic adjective/adverb choice. Suggestions: vary intensifiers and avoid repetition for clearer speech.

× Uh, the blue color of sky really attracts me and I love taking different types view pictures.

✓ The blue color of the sky really attracts me, and I love taking pictures of different types of views.

Missing article 'the' before 'sky' and incorrect word order 'different types view pictures'. Correct form is 'different types of views' and 'pictures of' to show possession/relationship. Maintain clear noun phrases and use articles appropriately. Suggestions: include necessary articles and use 'of' to link 'types' and 'views'.

× Honestly, I prefer urban area because there are a lot of greenery, there are a lot of trees and clouds and the atmosphere is very good and the colour of trees are very soothing for the eyes.

✓ Honestly, I prefer urban areas because there is a lot of greenery; there are many trees and clouds, and the atmosphere is very pleasant. The colour of the trees is very soothing to the eyes.

'Urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' when speaking generally. 'A lot of greenery' uses uncountable 'greenery' so use 'there is' not 'there are'. 'A lot of trees' better as 'many trees'. Subject-verb agreement: 'the colour of trees are' should be 'the colour of the trees is'. Also 'soothing for the eyes' -> 'soothing to the eyes'. Suggestions: distinguish countable and uncountable nouns and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× And my grandfather and my grandfather, uh, mother, uh, lives in village and I especially go there to meet.

✓ My grandfather and my grandmother live in a village, and I especially go there to visit them.

Pronoun and noun confusion: 'my grandfather and my grandfather, mother' is incorrect repetition and mislabeling. Use 'grandmother' if referring to the female grandparent. Verb agreement: 'lives' should be 'live' for plural subject. Add article 'a' before 'village'. 'Go there to meet' is unnatural; use 'visit them'. Suggestions: ensure correct referent nouns, match verb number to subject, include articles for singular nouns, and use natural collocations like 'visit them'.

× Honestly, I prefer in my own country because there are lot of area and places which I haven't explored yet.

✓ Honestly, I prefer my own country because there are a lot of areas and places that I haven't explored yet.

'Prefer in my own country' is awkward—omit 'in'. 'There are lot of area' needs 'a lot of' and plural 'areas' to match 'places'. Also add 'that' or 'which' for the relative clause. Ensure pluralization for countable nouns. Suggestions: use 'a lot of' with countable plural nouns and avoid unnecessary prepositions.

× And I would like to explore, uh, beaches in India like Goa and Kerala side, uh, they, the view is very beautiful and uh, very attractive.

✓ I would like to explore beaches in India, such as those in Goa and Kerala, because the views there are very beautiful and attractive.

Run-on and fragment issues: original mixes clauses improperly and repeats pronouns. 'Kerala side' is informal; use 'Kerala' or 'the Kerala coast'. Combine sentences with a clear reason clause and use plural 'views' and correct verb 'are'. Suggestions: avoid run-on sentences, use connectors like 'because' and keep pronouns clear and concise.