Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the sentence natural, correct grammar and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason or example. Use plural and correct verb forms, and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me capture unique moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines when I travel because the light changes the scene dramatically.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct grammar. Decide which you prefer (urban or rural), give a short reason, and use linking words to connect ideas. Use clear vocabulary like "urban" or "rural" and avoid vague phrases like "upper area."

Example: I prefer rural views because the natural landscapes and open fields feel peaceful, and the scenery often looks more picturesque than busy city streets.

Suggestion: Give a direct, polite answer and correct word choice and grammar. Replace informal fillers (like "actually", "like", "cause") with clear reasons. State preference and then explain with a specific example or contrast.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different architectures and landscapes that I don't see at home. For instance, I enjoy photographing historic European towns because their buildings and streets are very distinctive.

× I do like to take picture of different views.

✓ I do like to take pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'different views' implies more than one image; this is an article/number related error. Use the plural form when referring to multiple items: 'take pictures of...'.

× I prefer views in upper area is more gorgeous.

✓ I prefer views in the upper areas because they are more gorgeous.

The original sentence mixes two structures and lacks proper connectors and articles. 'Upper area' is vague and needs an article and plural or clearer wording. Use 'I prefer X because Y' to state a preference and reason. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('they are') when referring to 'areas'.

× I actually preserve the other country more than my country 'cause like I'm bored at my country views.

✓ I actually prefer other countries more than my country because I'm bored with the views in my country.

Several issues: 'preserve' is the wrong verb; 'prefer' expresses preference. 'The other country' is too specific; use 'other countries' for general comparison. Use 'bored with' not 'bored at'. Also use 'views in my country' rather than 'my country views' for natural word order. This fixes incorrect preposition use and verb choice.