Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and use correct word order and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Reduce hesitation words (umm) and avoid repetition (love/so much).

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially sunsets. For example, every evening I photograph the sky from my balcony because the colours change quickly, so I try to capture them before they fade.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first (choose one or say both clearly), then explain with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more natural. However, I also enjoy urban views for their architecture and lively streets, so I often choose based on my mood.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct vocabulary mistakes. Replace unclear words ('abuse') with the intended noun (e.g., 'landscapes' or 'scenery'). Provide one or two specific examples and use linking words to clarify your preference.

Example: I prefer both, but I especially enjoy scenery in my own country because of its beaches and volcanoes. For instance, the coastal views near my hometown are unique and much easier to visit than distant countries.

× Yes, I make taking pictures of different views passionately the sunset 'cause I really love sunset so much.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially sunsets, because I really love them.

The original uses 'make taking pictures' which is incorrect collocation; after verbs like 'enjoy' we use the verb + -ing form (gerund). Also 'the sunset' and 'sunset so much' are awkward; use the plural 'sunsets' or 'them' and 'especially' to indicate preference. Suggest using 'enjoy taking pictures' and 'especially sunsets' to be natural. Grammar rule: use 'enjoy' + verb-ing (gerund) and use appropriate noun forms (plural) and linking words such as 'especially'.

× Every time I see it, umm, every afternoon, I mesmerize how beautiful the sunset is.

✓ Every afternoon when I see it, I am mesmerized by how beautiful the sunset is.

'I mesmerize' is incorrect because 'mesmerize' is usually transitive (someone mesmerizes someone) or used in passive: 'I am mesmerized'. The intended meaning is a passive experience. Also use 'every afternoon when I see it' for clear time reference and 'mesmerized by' to show cause. Suggest using passive present simple or present continuous depending on emphasis.

× I prefer UMM views in rural areas because UMM. I think both I prefer, I prefer both urban areas in rural areas because.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas, but I also like urban views; I think I like both.

The sentence is disfluent and repeats 'UMM' and 'I prefer' causing redundancy. The intended contrast between rural and urban areas should be signalled with 'but' or 'also'. Rephrase to a clear structure: state preference, then acknowledge liking both. Avoid filler words and repeated phrases.

× Umm, I actually I prefer both in our country or like in another country.

✓ I actually prefer both: views in our country and views in other countries.

Word order and repetition ('I actually I') are incorrect. Use a clear parallel structure 'both: A and B' to list two items. Maintain present simple tense 'prefer' for general preference.

× But yes, in our country the the abuse is very beautiful and the beach, the volcano is so beautiful.

✓ In our country, the landscape is very beautiful, and the beaches and volcanoes are also stunning.

'the abuse' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'landscape' or 'scenery'; replace with correct noun 'landscape' or 'scenery'. Use plural 'beaches' and 'volcanoes' to match general statement. Use adjectives like 'beautiful' or stronger 'stunning'. Remove duplicated 'the the'. Ensure noun-adjective agreement and correct vocabulary.