Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve natural phrasing and remove filler words. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep sentences concise and grammatical (avoid “Just I”). Mention a brief reason or example to make the answer more vivid.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenic views. For example, I often photograph mountain areas and urban lakes because I love the contrast between rugged landscapes and calm city water, which makes each scene feel unique.

Suggestion: Clarify meaning and correct grammar. Use clearer linking words (e.g., “because”, “for example”). Avoid awkward phrases like “Riverside prominence” and “cities like me relax.” Keep to under five sentences and provide a concrete example of an urban feature that appeals to you.

Example: I like both, but I prefer urban views because modern architecture often sits alongside green parks, creating a nice balance between nature and city life. For example, riverside promenades in my city let me relax in a park and then walk to nearby cafés and galleries.

Suggestion: Fix grammar and be more specific. Use singular/plural correctly and avoid vague phrases like “many of those landscape.” Start with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons and a concise example of what you like to photograph abroad.

Example: I like the views in my country, but I prefer scenery abroad because I can photograph landscapes I haven’t seen before. For instance, I enjoy capturing dramatic coastlines and distinctive city skylines when I travel, which help me build a more varied photography portfolio.

× Just I enjoy taking pictures of different scenic views because I own a camera and like choosing my own subjects.

✓ I just enjoy taking pictures of different scenic views because I own a camera and like choosing my own subjects.

Word order is incorrect: adverb 'just' should come before the verb phrase 'enjoy' or after the subject 'I'. Move 'just' to 'I just enjoy...' to make the sentence natural and grammatically correct. Keep the rest of the sentence as is.

× I often photograph mountain areas and urban lakes or ponds since I find the contrast between wild landscape and city water features really interesting.

✓ I often photograph mountain areas and urban lakes or ponds since I find the contrast between the wild landscape and city water features really interesting.

'Landscape' is a countable noun here and needs the definite article 'the' to refer to a specific type of landscape contrasted with city water features. Add 'the' before 'wild landscape' to make the noun phrase grammatical.

× I enjoy both, but I particularly like urban views because they combine modern architecture in green spaces, which creates a pleasant balance between nature and city life.

✓ I enjoy both, but I particularly like urban views because they combine modern architecture and green spaces, which creates a pleasant balance between nature and city life.

The phrase 'combine modern architecture in green spaces' is incorrect; 'combine A and B' should be used to list two elements. Change 'in' to 'and' so the sentence correctly states that urban views combine modern architecture and green spaces.

× For example, parks and Riverside prominence in cities like me relax without losing access to cafe and culture.

✓ For example, parks and riverside promenades in cities help me relax without losing access to cafes and culture.

Multiple issues: 'Riverside prominence' is incorrect word choice; the intended phrase is 'riverside promenades'. 'Like me relax' is ungrammatical; use 'help me relax'. 'Cafe' should be plural 'cafes' to match 'culture' and general meaning. Correct word choice and structure for clarity.

× I enjoy views at home, but I prefer scenic views in other countries because I've never seen many of those landscape before.

✓ I enjoy views at home, but I prefer scenic views in other countries because I've never seen many of those landscapes before.

'Landscape' is countable/plural when referring to many types; use the plural 'landscapes'. This matches the present perfect 'I've never seen' which refers to multiple instances. Also 'before' is acceptable at end; keep tense consistent.

× I also like photographing new places so I can capture memorable image of mountains, coastline or unique city skyline.

✓ I also like photographing new places so I can capture memorable images of mountains, coastlines, or unique city skylines.

Several noun number and article issues: 'image' should be plural 'images' because 'mountains, coastline or unique city skyline' lists multiple items; make them plural to match. Use plural forms 'coastlines' and 'city skylines' for consistency. Also add commas for clarity.