Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and use correct tense and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views), then give one or two specific examples and a reason. Avoid repetition and filler words, and keep to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words such as “for example” or “because” to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture memorable places. For example, I often photograph parks and mountains when I travel, as I like the colors and peaceful atmosphere. These pictures help me remember the trips and relax when I look at them later.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and support it with clear, relevant reasons. Avoid filler sounds (“uh”) and unclear phrases. Use one linking phrase (e.g. “because” or “because of”) and provide 1–2 concrete reasons why you prefer urban views, such as architecture, busy streets or cultural sites.

Example: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the architecture and lively streets. For instance, I like photographing city skylines, old buildings and busy markets, which show the local culture and energy. These scenes offer interesting details and contrasts that I find inspiring.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid repeating words. Use correct grammar (e.g. “I prefer views in my own country”) and give specific reasons or examples. Use linking words such as “because” and “for example,” and keep the response to 2–4 clear sentences. Mention a particular place or routine to make it more vivid.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I love the natural scenery here. For example, I often walk in local gardens and green parks in the morning, which are peaceful and photogenic. These familiar places make me feel relaxed and give me many good photo opportunities.

× Yes, I had a light to click on different pictures because I like in my pictures different different places and I like so much when I see my pictures in different locations like parks or parks, mountains, etcetera.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different places because I enjoy seeing my photos in various locations such as parks and mountains.

The original sentence contains incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'I had a light to click on different pictures' is incorrect; use 'I like taking pictures' (verb + -ing) to express a habitual action. Remove repeated words ('different different') and replace 'I like so much when I see my pictures in different locations' with a concise clause 'I enjoy seeing my photos in various locations.' Use 'such as' before examples. Suggestion: practice using 'like + verb-ing' for hobbies and avoid literal translations like 'click on pictures.'

× I prefer views in urban areas because, uh, the, uh, specifics spend a moment in like, uh, factories, office and, uh, town of cities like this. So I prefer an urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because people spend time in factories, offices, and towns. So I prefer urban areas.

Multiple issues: incorrect article use ('an urban areas' should be 'urban areas' or 'an urban area'); unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'specifics' and the noun 'specifics' is wrong; 'office' should be plural 'offices' for general meaning (singular/plural issue). Simplify to 'people spend time' for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and drop incorrect articles; use 'urban areas' without 'an.'

× I prefer I prefer view in my countries because I like a natural scenes and I want to go for a nature crisis like greeneries and gardens and gardens area and and generally I'm going in morning for a walking and exercises because of the.

✓ I prefer views in my country because I like natural scenes and I want to be in nature, such as green areas and gardens. Generally, I go for walks and exercise in the morning.

Errors: repeated phrase 'I prefer I prefer' and wrong number agreement: 'view' should be plural 'views'; 'my countries' should be singular 'my country' if referring to one country; 'a natural scenes' mixes article with plural—use 'natural scenes' without 'a'; 'go for a nature crisis' is incorrect and likely meant 'be in nature' or 'go to natural areas'; 'greeneries' is nonstandard—use 'green areas' or 'greenery'; 'gardens area' should be 'garden areas' or 'gardens' and remove duplication. 'I'm going in morning for a walking' should be 'I go for walks in the morning' (present habit). Suggestion: check noun number (singular/plural) and use standard collocations: 'go for a walk,' 'green areas,' 'in the morning.'