Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms; use past participles correctly (e.g. "places I have visited"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places I have visited. For example, I often photograph mountains and valleys, and later I share the stories behind those photos with my parents.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid vague phrasing. State your preference clearly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Use more precise vocabulary ("rural areas", "natural scenery", "local life").

Example: I prefer rural areas because their natural scenery feels more cinematic and peaceful. For instance, I can photograph mountain valleys and the everyday life of local people, which gives my photos more character.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and two concise reasons. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrasing (e.g. "my country is the most beautiful"). If you mention future plans, state them simply and correctly. Use linking words like "because" and "also" appropriately.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I love the people and the familiar scenic landscapes, such as mountains and coastlines. I would also like to visit some foreign countries in the future to see different cultures and scenery.

× Yes, I like taking picture of a different youth captaining landscape, mountain, valley, different different scenes makes me happy and that photographs helps me to remember the place I have been visited and I tell the stories to my parents that I have been visited there.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different landscapes, mountains, valleys and other scenes; they make me happy, and those photographs help me remember the places I have visited so I can tell my parents about them.

The sentence has multiple adjective/adverb and word choice issues and also involves pluralization and verb agreement. 'Taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' (plural noun). 'Different youth captaining' is incorrect word choice; likely 'different landscapes' fits. Use plural nouns for multiple items: 'mountains, valleys, and other scenes.' 'Different different' is redundant. 'That photographs helps' mixes demonstrative and number: use 'they' or 'those photographs' and 'help' to agree with plural subject. 'The place I have been visited' is passive and ungrammatical; correct is 'the places I have visited.' Suggestion: simplify into shorter clauses, ensure noun forms (singular/plural) and subject-verb agreement are correct, and prefer active voice for visited.

× I prefer the views in whole area because I I feel the rural area really more cinematic and gives me a really good atmosphere that I can feel a very good positivity and take better pictures of nature, mountain valleys and raw life of people.

✓ I prefer views in the whole area because I feel rural areas are more cinematic and give me a really good atmosphere; I feel very positive and can take better pictures of nature, mountain valleys and the raw lives of people.

There are subject-verb agreement and noun number issues. 'I prefer the views in whole area' needs articles and/or plural: 'views in the whole area' or 'views in the whole area.' 'The rural area really more cinematic and gives' mixes singular/plural and lacks verb 'are': use 'rural areas are more cinematic and give' so verbs agree with plural subject. 'Take better pictures of nature, mountain valleys and raw life of people' needs 'the raw lives of people' or 'people's raw lives' for clarity. Also remove doubled 'I'. Suggestion: ensure subjects and verbs match in number and use consistent singular/plural nouns.

× I prefer views in my own country because I think that the my country is most beautiful and prettiest country because I like the people, beautiful scenery, mountain and many more.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I think my country is the most beautiful and prettiest; I like the people, the beautiful scenery, the mountains and more.

Pronoun/article misuse and redundancy: 'the my country' is incorrect; use 'my country.' Superlatives require 'the': 'the most beautiful.' Saying 'most beautiful and prettiest' is redundant—use one superlative. Nouns need articles and plural where appropriate: 'the mountains' and 'the beautiful scenery.' Suggestion: remove redundant words, use proper possessive pronouns without 'the' before them, and include 'the' with superlatives and specific nouns.

× I also short lived is shortlisted the some more abroad countries that I wanted to be visit there in future.

✓ I have also shortlisted some foreign countries that I would like to visit in the future.

This sentence has major word order and structure problems. 'I also short lived is shortlisted' is nonsensical; use present-perfect 'I have shortlisted' to indicate an action with present relevance. 'The some more abroad countries' should be 'some foreign countries' or 'some countries abroad.' 'That I wanted to be visit there in future' mixes tense and unnecessary words; use 'that I would like to visit in the future.' Suggestion: use correct verb forms and common collocations ('shortlist', 'countries abroad', 'would like to visit'), keep word order subject-verb-object, and match tense to meaning.