Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the sentence grammatically correct, concise, and add a brief reason or example. Use a clear topic sentence followed by one supporting detail and a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views when I travel. For example, I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes with my friends because it helps us remember the trip and share our experiences later.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then provide specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (use 'prefer', plural/singular forms, and avoid repetition). Keep it concise and natural.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are cleaner and greener. For instance, I enjoy open fields and forests since they feel peaceful and offer better places for taking nature photos.

Suggestion: Answer directly whether you prefer local or foreign views, then explain with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Use correct pronouns and verb forms and avoid vague generalizations.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new sights and a sense of discovery. However, I also appreciate familiar views at home because they feel comforting and meaningful.

× Yes, I am like taking picture different view when I am travelling many tireless and I am clicking photo with my friend for traveling.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views when I travel a lot, and I take photos with my friends while traveling.

Errors: incorrect use of 'am like' (should be simple present 'like') and 'taking picture' (countable noun needs plural 'pictures' and preposition 'of' before 'different views'), 'when I am travelling many tireless' is ungrammatical and likely intended 'when I travel a lot' (use simple present for habitual action), 'I am clicking photo' should be 'I take photos' or 'I am taking photos' depending on context; 'with my friend' should be plural 'friends' if plural is meant. Suggestions: use simple present for habits ('I like', 'I travel', 'I take photos'), use plural forms for countable nouns ('pictures', 'views', 'friends'), include correct prepositions ('pictures of different views', 'while traveling').

× I am prefer to rural area because they are very clean and green and mostly mostly important. All the nature is a rural area are good and prep and urban area like city area.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are usually clean and green and very important. The natural environment in rural areas is good, unlike urban areas such as cities.

Errors: 'I am prefer' uses incorrect tense/form; use simple present 'I prefer'. 'to rural area' needs plural or article: 'rural areas' or 'the rural area'. 'they are very clean and green and mostly mostly important' is awkward and repetitive; replace with 'they are usually clean and green and very important'. 'All the nature is a rural area are good' has subject-verb agreement and word order problems; correct to 'The natural environment in rural areas is good'. 'prep' is unclear and should be removed. Suggestions: use simple present for preferences, match singular/plural forms, avoid repetition, and use clear noun phrases ('natural environment', 'urban areas such as cities').

× Some people are prefer to home country because connecting to his home and other country foreign country like thrill and discovery.

✓ Some people prefer their home country because it connects them to their roots, while other people prefer foreign countries for the thrill and opportunity to discover new things.

Errors: 'Some people are prefer' uses incorrect auxiliary; use simple present 'Some people prefer'. 'to home country' needs possessive article 'their home country' or 'their home'. 'connecting to his home' mixes pronouns and is ungrammatical; use 'because it connects them to their roots'. 'other country foreign country like thrill and discovery' is ungrammatical and repetitive; rewrite as 'other people prefer foreign countries for the thrill and opportunity to discover new things'. Suggestions: use consistent plural pronouns ('people' -> 'their'), use simple present for general statements, avoid repeating words and ensure clear parallel structure when contrasting ideas.