Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear, direct answer with a simple topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Focus on clarity: say whether you like taking photos and why, using correct verb forms and articles.

Example: No, I don’t usually like taking pictures of different views. I prefer to enjoy the scene with my eyes because photographs often miss the atmosphere and small details. For example, when I visit a beach I like to remember the sound of the waves rather than only keeping photos.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors (because, and, so). Use plural/singular correctly and avoid repeating words. Provide a short example to illustrate your point.

Example: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because they are closer to nature and have a slower pace of life. Also, local traditions and community ties in villages make them culturally rich. For instance, when I visit my grandparents’ village I enjoy walking in fields and joining traditional festivals.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give clear, logical reasons. Avoid vague metaphors and awkward phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and give a concrete reason such as familiarity, culture, or convenience. Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with the culture and language, which makes travel easier and more comfortable. For example, I can read signs, talk with locals, and understand historical sites, so I enjoy those visits more than travelling abroad.

× No, I do not like pictures different view because reality is real life so simple pictures I like.

✓ No, I do not like pictures of different views because reality is real life, so I like simple pictures.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing prepositions. 'pictures different view' should be 'pictures of different views' (preposition + plural). The clause 'so simple pictures I like' is awkward; it should be 'so I like simple pictures' to follow subject-verb-object order. Improve by placing modifiers after the noun and keeping a clear subject and verb: 'I like simple pictures.'

× I like rural area because they are connected with the nature and their culture are really good compared to urban area.

✓ I like rural areas because they are connected with nature and their cultures are better compared to urban areas.

Several plural/singular mismatches: 'rural area' should be 'rural areas' when speaking generally. 'They are connected with the nature' should be 'connected with nature' (no article). 'Their culture are' is wrong: 'culture' must be plural ('cultures') to match 'they', and the verb should be 'is' for singular or 'are' for plural; here use plural noun with 'are' but 'cultures are better' is natural. Also 'urban area' should be 'urban areas' for parallel comparison. Use parallel plural nouns when speaking generally.

× In a rural area live in rural area very good place for living and.

✓ Rural areas are very good places to live in.

The original is fragmented and repetitive. It mixes prepositional phrases and lacks proper subject-verb structure. Use a clear subject 'Rural areas' and verb 'are' plus a noun phrase 'very good places to live in' for natural English. Avoid repetition and finish the sentence.

× I prefer views in our own country because our own country is our mother country and mother country is our blood design show.

✓ I prefer views in our own country because it is our motherland and represents our heritage.

The phrase 'mother country' can be 'motherland'; 'mother country is our blood design show' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace with 'represents our heritage' to convey the intended meaning. Also use 'it' to avoid repetition: 'because it is our motherland.' This fixes idiomatic usage and sentence clarity.

× In our mother country, any beautiful place is like breeze and other everything.

✓ In our motherland, every beautiful place feels refreshing and special.

'Any beautiful place is like breeze and other everything' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Any' plus singular is odd here; use 'every beautiful place' or 'any beautiful place' with clearer comparison. 'Is like breeze' should be 'feels like a breeze' or 'feels refreshing'; 'and other everything' is meaningless and must be replaced with a clear adjective such as 'special.' Ensure adjectives follow the noun and use natural collocations.

× So I prefer our own countries.

✓ So I prefer our own country.

The student previously referred to 'our own country' singular; switching to 'our own countries' is inconsistent. If speaking about the speaker's single country, use singular 'country.' If referring to multiple countries belonging to different people, clarify context. Maintain consistent singular/plural choice.