Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct tense and pronoun mistakes, avoid fillers, and condense repetition.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel I photograph landscapes and cityscapes to preserve memories, and then I share my favorite shots with friends on social media.

Suggestion: Use accurate vocabulary and correct spelling. Give one clear reason and a specific example, linking ideas with connectors. Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

Example: I prefer rural views because the air is fresher and there are more trees and wide open spaces, which help me relax. For instance, I enjoy photographing a quiet village lake where the sky and trees reflect in the water.

Suggestion: Clarify your main idea and use specific vocabulary (landscape, scenery). Use linking words to explain reasons and give one concrete example of a place you like to explore at home.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because there is a wide variety of landscapes and I still have many places to discover. For example, I often visit the coastal cliffs near my hometown to photograph dramatic sunsets and local fishing villages.

× Definitely, I love capturing pictures when I was traveled everywhere because it cannot me remember these moments and the place and I and I like to umm, share my photos to my social media to my with my friends.

✓ Definitely, I love taking pictures when I travel everywhere because it helps me remember these moments and places, and I like to share my photos on social media with my friends.

Multiple tense and structure errors: 'when I was traveled' is incorrect; use simple present 'when I travel' for a habitual action (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). 'It cannot me remember' uses wrong verb and object order; use 'it helps me remember' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26 sentence structure). 'places' should be plural (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'share my photos to my social media to my with my friends' has incorrect prepositions and redundancy; use 'share my photos on social media with my friends' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Suggestion: use consistent tense for habitual activities, correct verb choice ('help' instead of 'cannot'), ensure subject-verb-object order, use plural nouns where appropriate, and use correct prepositions 'on' for platforms and 'with' for people.

× I definitely prefer rural areas because the air is fresh and there are many glass and many trees.

✓ I definitely prefer rural areas because the air is fresh and there are many grasses and trees.

'glass' is incorrect here; likely meant 'grass' or 'grasses' — use 'grass' or 'areas of grass' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13 incorrect word choice/adjective). Also ensure plural consistency: 'many trees' is correct but 'many grass' is wrong; use 'a lot of grass' or 'many grassy areas' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1 singular/plural). Suggestion: choose the correct noun ('grass' or 'grassy areas') and match plural markers appropriately.

× It can let me feel relaxed.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed.

'can let me feel relaxed' is wordy and uses an unnecessary modal 'can' and causative 'let'; the simple verb 'makes' is natural for cause and effect (Grammar Problem Type ID 4 modal verb usage and ID 12 pronoun/verb choice). Suggestion: use 'makes me feel' to express that something causes a feeling.

× So I like Lulu arrows because it's not PO pollution like cities.

✓ So I like rural areas because they don't have pollution like cities do.

'Lulu arrows' is a phonetic misspelling of 'rural areas' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13 incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and ID 26 sentence structure). 'it's not PO pollution' is ungrammatical — use 'they don't have pollution' to agree with plural 'rural areas' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27 subject-verb agreement and ID 22 article errors). Suggestion: correct spelling to 'rural areas', use plural agreement 'they don't' and avoid unclear abbreviations like 'PO'.

× Personally, I prefer travel in my own country because it connects with many landship and many outlook.

✓ Personally, I prefer to travel in my own country because it has many landscapes and viewpoints.

After 'prefer' followed by a verb, use the infinitive 'to travel' or gerund 'traveling' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8 verb + -ing form / ID 6 present tense usage). 'connects with' is awkward; better to say 'has' for features. 'landship' and 'outlook' are incorrect word choices — use 'landscapes' and 'viewpoints' or 'scenery' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13 incorrect use of adjectives or nouns). Suggestion: use 'prefer to travel' and correct nouns 'landscapes' and 'viewpoints'.

× I can. I don't explore it and my hometown is a very beautiful city, so I love to explore it.

✓ I haven't fully explored it, and my hometown is a very beautiful city, so I love exploring it.

'I can. I don't explore it' are fragments and use incorrect tense/aspect. Likely intended meaning is incomplete exploration: use present perfect 'haven't explored' or 'haven't fully explored' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5 past tense issue / ID 6 present tense issue). 'I love to explore it' is acceptable but 'I love exploring it' is more natural. Suggestion: combine ideas into one sentence, use present perfect to indicate an action not completed, and use consistent verb forms.