Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 总体表现很好：回答自然、直接，包含主题句和具体例子，句子简洁且表达清晰。但可以稍微增加连接词使衔接更流畅，并替换部分常见词以丰富词汇（如 use “capture the atmosphere”或“preserve memories”替换“remember”/“look back”）。注意避免重复“remember/look back”类似表达。

Example: Yes, I do. Whenever I travel or simply go out, I take photos to capture the atmosphere because images help preserve the emotions I felt there. For instance, I often photograph sunsets and bustling city streets so I can revisit those moments later.

Suggestion: 回答结构清晰，有对比并给出具体细节，但可改进的地方是使用更自然的连接词（例如“on the other hand”或“whereas”），以及修正个别表达使之更地道（如“advertising size”不自然，可说“large billboards”或“excessive signage”）。此外可加入短评说明个人感受以增强说服力。

Example: I prefer rural views because the scenery is more varied and peaceful, with wide fields and rolling hills that feel refreshing. On the other hand, urban areas often have similar-looking streets and large billboards, which can make them feel monotonous to me.

Suggestion: 回答内容充实且有理由支持，表达自然。建议使用更连贯的连接词（例如“firstly”，“moreover”），并用更地道的短语替换“vast territory”（如“vast and varied geography”）或“spending too much time or money”（如“incurring high costs or long travel times”）。可补充一两句具体景点作为例子提高说服力。

Example: I prefer views in my own country. Firstly, China’s vast and varied geography offers everything from mountains to deserts, and secondly, it’s more convenient and affordable to travel domestically, so I can see many different places without incurring high costs or long travel times. For example, I can easily visit a nearby river valley one weekend and a mountain range the next.

× In contrast, many cities look very similar with the same streets and advertising size, so they usually seem monotonous to me.

✓ In contrast, many cities look very similar with the same streets and advertising, so they usually seem monotonous to me.

句中“advertising size”用法不当且不符合语境。原句想表达的是“广告（的存在或风格）”导致城市相似，而不是“广告尺寸”。这属于形容词/名词搭配或词汇选择错误。建议直接使用“advertising”或改为更具体的表达如“the same style of advertising”或“the same billboards”。中国学生应注意名词短语的搭配，避免直译造成不自然的词组。

× Actually, I prefer views in my own country because China has a vast territory, very diverse landscapes such as mountains, rivers and deserts.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in my own country because China has a vast territory and very diverse landscapes such as mountains, rivers, and deserts.

原句中缺少连接词使得并列结构不够清晰，应在“vast territory”与“very diverse landscapes”之间加上连词“and”。这属于冠词/句子连词连接的小问题（在给定列表中最接近的是“Article errors”，用于标注需加连词的并列结构）。建议写作时注意并列成分之间用连词连接，列举项之间用逗号分隔。