Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more decisive and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes or No), then give one brief reason and one specific example. Reduce hesitations and filler words (uh, um, I). Use plural/singular correctly (views, photographer).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love capturing interesting scenes. For example, last month I photographed the city skyline at sunset and liked how the colors changed the mood.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then provide two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, and). Avoid repetition and correct countable/uncountable nouns (buildings, places, sites).

Example: I prefer rural areas because they offer more natural scenery and open spaces. For instance, I can photograph fields, rivers, and old farmhouses, which give more variety than tall buildings in the city.

Suggestion: Clarify your point and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., 'May 21st', 'outside life'). Start with a direct answer (own country or other countries), then give contrasting reasons and one specific example. Keep sentences short and coherent.

Example: I mainly prefer photographing views in my own country because I know the best scenic spots and local seasons. However, I also enjoy visiting countries like Switzerland for its dramatic mountains and lakes, which offer very different photo opportunities.

× Uh, actually I'm not so much, uh, photo taking person.

✓ Uh, actually I'm not much of a photo-taking person.

The original uses incorrect word order and phrasing. Use the adjective phrase 'much of a' with the noun 'photo-taking person' (hyphenate photo-taking as a compound modifier). Suggestion: say 'I'm not much of a photo-taking person' to be natural and grammatically correct.

× So yes, I, I, I actually, I like to take, uh, photo in different view.

✓ So yes, I actually like to take photos of different views.

The sentence contains disfluencies and incorrect singular/plural and preposition use. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' and the correct preposition is 'of' for 'photos of views'. Remove repeated fillers for clarity. Suggestion: 'I actually like to take photos of different views.'

× I prefer a rural area because in, in the urban area there is lots of building, there is no place to take picture.

✓ I prefer rural areas because in urban areas there are lots of buildings and no place to take pictures.

Multiple issues: preposition and article use and singular/plural. Use plural 'rural areas' or 'the countryside' if general. 'In urban areas' is better than 'in the urban area'. 'There is lots of building' should be 'there are lots of buildings' (subject-verb agreement and plural). 'no place to take picture' should be 'no place to take pictures'. Suggestion: 'I prefer rural areas because in urban areas there are lots of buildings and no place to take pictures.'

× But in rural areas, uh, there are lots of, uh, there, there are lots of site that we can take picture.

✓ But in rural areas there are many sites where we can take pictures.

'Lots of site' is incorrect: 'site' must be plural 'sites' and 'lots of' is informal; 'many' is natural. Also use 'where' or 'that' with appropriate clause: 'sites where we can take pictures.' Also plural 'pictures'. Suggestion: 'there are many sites where we can take pictures.'

× Absolutely. I prefer views for photographing May 21st because there are lots of good scenic spot in my country.

✓ Absolutely. I prefer views for photographing, because there are many good scenic spots in my country.

The original has unclear phrase 'photographing May 21st' (probably unintended date) and incorrect singular/plural: 'scenic spot' should be 'scenic spots'. 'Lots of' to 'many' optional. Also add a comma and remove or clarify the date. Suggestion: 'I prefer views for photographing because there are many good scenic spots in my country.'

× Uh, other than I also like to go outside from my country because in outside life, Switzerland, uh, European countries, there are lots of European countries that have, that have.

✓ I also like to travel abroad because countries like Switzerland and others in Europe have many beautiful places.

This sentence is disfluent and ungrammatical. 'Go outside from my country' should be 'travel abroad'. 'In outside life' is incorrect and should be removed. Rephrase to name examples: 'countries like Switzerland and other European countries have many beautiful places.' Suggestion: 'I also like to travel abroad because countries like Switzerland and other European countries have many beautiful places.'