Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and filler words, correct grammar (e.g., 'take them' not 'take it'), and give one or two specific details or an example. Use a linking phrase if you add a reason.

Example: Yes, I do enjoy taking photos of views, but I often forget to do so. For example, last weekend I admired a beautiful lakeside sunset but decided to watch it rather than photograph it, so I had no pictures on my phone afterwards.

Suggestion: Answer directly with correct grammar and clearer structure: state your preference in one sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'so'). Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because they feel safer and much quieter. For instance, when I visit the countryside I can relax and enjoy fresh air away from traffic and noise, which helps me unwind.

Suggestion: Make a clear topic sentence, reduce repetition, and give specific reasons or examples. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to make your response coherent. Correct tense and phrasing (e.g., 'I already know my country well').

Example: I prefer seeing views in other countries because I already know my own country well and want to broaden my experiences. For example, I would love to see traditional markets in Japan or coastal towns in Portugal to learn about different cultures and landscapes.

× I enjoy like seeing the reality just by uh, rather than taking pictures of Atlas.

✓ I enjoy seeing reality rather than taking pictures of everything.

The original sentence misuses 'like' and 'by' with 'seeing'; also 'Atlas' is likely wrong word. The verb phrase should be 'enjoy seeing' (verb + -ing) without extra 'like' or 'by'. Use a clear object ('reality' or 'the scene') and a parallel structure 'rather than taking pictures'. Improve by removing filler words and ensuring correct -ing form after 'enjoy'.

× I found out uh, there were no photos in my phone.

✓ I found that there were no photos on my phone.

'Found out' and 'found' can be used, but 'found that' is more natural here; 'in my phone' is incorrect preposition use—use 'on my phone'. The verb 'were' is correct past tense; adjust preposition to 'on'.

× Umm I prefer the latter because rural area give me a sense of most safer like in a quiet place I feel more relaxed and calming down then I've been here.

✓ Umm I prefer the latter because rural areas give me a sense of safety; in a quiet place I feel more relaxed and calmer than when I'm in the city.

The original has singular/plural mismatch 'rural area give'—subject and verb must agree ('areas give'). 'Most safer' is incorrect comparative; use 'safer' or 'a sense of safety'. 'Calming down then I've been here' is ungrammatical; rewrite to 'more relaxed and calmer than when I'm in the city' for clear comparison and correct tense and word choice.

× Was so close to the city center which make me really.

✓ It was so close to the city center, which really affected me.

The sentence lacks a proper subject 'It' and has subject-verb agreement errors: 'make me' should agree with singular 'which' and take past form 'affected' given context. Provide a clear subject and verb and complete the idea.

× Umm to be honest, I prefer to prefer to go outside and watch the views in other countries because I I've already know like deeply about my countries and I would like to have more chance to watch what is happening in other countries and I would like to broaden my experience.

✓ Umm to be honest, I prefer to go abroad to see views in other countries because I already know my country well, and I would like more opportunities to see what is happening elsewhere and broaden my experience.

This sentence contains repetition ('prefer to prefer'), tense and verb errors ('I've already know' should be 'I already know' or 'I already know well'), incorrect plural possessive ('my countries' -> 'my country'), and awkward phrasing. Simplify and correct verb forms: 'prefer to go abroad', 'I already know my country well', 'more opportunities', and 'broaden my experience' for concise, grammatical expression.