Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, đồng thời dùng liên từ và chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: dùng thì đúng (taking pictures), danh từ số nhiều (views), đại từ và mạo từ chính xác (these/that), và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết về lí do hoặc cảm xúc để phong phú nội dung.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember places I've visited. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes so I can recall the atmosphere and colors of each trip.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và lý do cụ thể; sửa ngữ pháp so sánh (more beautiful than), danh từ số nhiều (views), và tránh từ thừa. Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về cảnh nông thôn để minh họa ý tưởng.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are more natural and peaceful than urban scenes. For instance, I like photos of green fields and small rivers because they feel calming and fresh.

Suggestion: Cần sửa phát âm lặp từ, loại bỏ tiếng ậm ừ (uh), sửa ngữ pháp (I have seen, views, other countries), và làm rõ lý do bằng ví dụ cụ thể về điều mới mẻ bạn muốn khám phá. Giữ giới hạn 1-3 câu rõ ràng.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I've already seen most places in my own country and I want to discover new landscapes. For example, I'd love to photograph coastal cliffs and foreign architecture I've never seen before.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different view because this help me remember the other view, the memory when I visit.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they help me remember other views and the memories when I visit.

Many nouns need plural forms when talking about more than one (picture -> pictures, view -> views, memory -> memories). Also the pronoun must agree with the plural noun (this -> they) and the verb must match the plural subject (help -> help). Use plural to refer to general repeated experiences. Suggestion: identify countable nouns and make them plural if you mean more than one; make verbs agree with their subjects.

× I prefer view of rural here because it's natural and really beautiful than the town the.

✓ I prefer rural views here because they are more natural and much more beautiful than the town.

The original uses wrong prepositions and article placement (view of rural -> rural views; 'the town the' is incorrect). Comparative structure also incorrect: use 'more... than' and agreement with plural 'views' requires plural verb 'are'. Suggestion: use 'rural views' for general preference, use 'more ... than' for comparisons, and ensure correct word order ('than the town').

× I prefer view of uh other country because in my country I have see all old view and I want to the new one.

✓ I prefer views of other countries because in my country I have seen all the old views and I want new ones.

Several pluralization issues: 'view' should be 'views' when speaking generally, 'other country' should be 'other countries' if comparing multiple countries, 'old view' -> 'old views', 'new one' -> 'new ones'. Also verb tense 'have see' is incorrect (see next). Suggestion: make countable nouns plural when referring to multiple instances.

× I prefer view of uh other country because in my country I have see all old view and I want to the new one.

✓ I prefer views of other countries because in my country I have seen all the old views and I want new ones.

The phrase 'have see' uses the base form 'see' instead of the past participle 'seen' required for present perfect (have seen). Use present perfect to talk about experiences up to now. Suggestion: use 'have/has' plus past participle (seen) for present perfect.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different view because this help me remember the other view, the memory when I visit.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they help me remember other views and the memories when I visit.

The original uses 'this help' where 'this' refers to plural items and verb is base form. For third person singular subjects, verbs take -s (he helps), but here the subject should be plural 'they help'. Ensure subject and verb agree in number. Suggestion: determine the correct subject (singular or plural) and adjust verb accordingly.