Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "no not at all" quá mạnh nếu bạn thỉnh thoảng chụp; dùng thì và mạo từ đúng). Thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, nơi nào, tại sao) với từ nối phù hợp như "however" hoặc "sometimes" để mạch lạc.

Example: I don't usually take photos of views, but sometimes I do when I travel. For example, during my last trip to the mountains I took several pictures because the scenery was especially beautiful and peaceful.

Suggestion: Cần phát biểu quan điểm trực tiếp, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (ví dụ: "I prefer rural areas to urban areas"). Dùng liên từ (because, while, whereas) để nêu lý do rõ ràng, kèm ví dụ hoặc mô tả ngắn để cụ thể hoá sở thích.

Example: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because the countryside is quieter and more relaxing. For instance, I enjoy walking by fields and listening to birds, which I rarely experience in a noisy city.

Suggestion: Cần nêu quan điểm rõ ràng (own country or other countries) và sửa cấu trúc câu, bỏ lặp từ ("old old"), dùng danh từ và tính từ đúng ("historic buildings"). Thêm lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: cảm giác thân quen, giá trị lịch sử) và một ví dụ ngắn để minh họa.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and often have historic charm. For example, my city has several old towers and century-old houses that remind me of local traditions and family history.

× Uh no not at all.

✓ No, not at all.

The original fragment lacks proper punctuation and natural structure. Add a comma after 'No' and capitalize appropriately to form a complete negative response. Suggestion: use 'No, not at all.' for clarity.

× But some money efficient views that I would like to take a capture is very beautiful and some some sometime like in my trip when I am at my travel.

✓ But some inexpensive views that I would like to capture are very beautiful, for example sometimes on my trips when I am travelling.

Multiple issues: 'money efficient' is incorrect collocation (use 'inexpensive' or 'cheap'); 'take a capture' is ungrammatical (use 'capture' or 'take a photo'); subject-verb agreement with 'views' requires plural verb 'are'; duplicate words 'some some' and awkward time phrase 'some sometime' need simplification. Suggestion: use clear nouns and verbs ('inexpensive views', 'capture', 'on my trips', 'I am travelling').

× In my perspective, I think I will prefer more rural areas, areas dance urban areas because it have a view of countryside.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer rural areas more than urban areas because they have views of the countryside.

Tense and modal misuse: 'I think I will prefer' is awkward for a general preference; use present simple 'I prefer'. 'areas dance urban areas' is garbled; replace with 'than urban areas'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it have' should be 'they have' to match plural 'areas'. Use 'views of the countryside' for natural phrasing.

× It's a very peaceful that I would prefer than the crowded at the city.

✓ It is very peaceful, which I prefer to the crowded city.

Article and structure errors: 'a very peaceful' is incomplete—use adjective with noun or a clause. 'that I would prefer than' is incorrect comparative structure; use 'which I prefer to'. 'the crowded at the city' is ungrammatical; use 'the crowded city' or 'crowded places in the city'. Suggestion: keep comparisons with 'prefer A to B'.

× I would prefer my views, my old country's views than others views because it's a I'm.

✓ I prefer the views of my old country to those of other countries because...

Comparative structure: 'prefer ... than' is incorrect; use 'prefer A to B'. Use 'the views of my old country' and 'those of other countries' for clarity. The fragment 'because it's a I'm' is incomplete and should be elaborated (e.g., 'because it is familiar to me').

× I live in the cities which have a old old tower, old house that have built in many decades.

✓ I live in a city that has an old tower and old houses that were built many decades ago.

Articles and agreement: use 'a city' instead of 'the cities' if referring to one city; 'have a old' should be 'has an old' (use 'an' before vowel sound). 'old house that have built' is incorrect passive form; use 'houses that were built' and include 'ago' for time reference. Also remove duplicate 'old' repetition. Suggestion: use correct article, singular/plural agreement, and passive past 'were built' with 'many decades ago'.