Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify and correct word choice, reduce repetition, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use accurate verbs (e.g. 'take' or 'click') and avoid filler words like 'like'. Keep the answer within 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. Since childhood I have photographed butterflies, flowers and scenic spots when visiting parks, and I keep the best photos as memories.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference statement, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Improve grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and use linking words (because, for example). Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid redundant phrases.

Example: I prefer rural views because life there is simpler and more peaceful. For example, I enjoy photographing domestic animals, old vehicles and small village scenes because they capture authentic daily life.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer (prefer my country / other countries / both) and then add one clear reason and a specific example. Correct grammar and remove hesitations. Use a linking word such as 'however' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because India has a lot of diverse scenery. For example, I have heard that the Himalayan regions have beautiful mountains and scenic valleys, so I would like to visit and photograph them.

× I love to tickle pictures from when I was a child, I took, I clicked pictures of like butterflies and nature and when we went to like any park or any scenic beauty.

✓ I have loved taking pictures since I was a child; I used to take photos of butterflies and nature when we went to parks or other scenic places.

The student used incorrect verb forms and idioms: 'tickle pictures' is wrong (incorrect verb), and mixing simple past 'I took, I clicked' with present 'I love' causes tense inconsistency. 'Have loved taking' or 'I've loved taking' shows duration from childhood to present; 'used to take' indicates habitual past. Use 'take photos' or 'take pictures' and 'parks or other scenic places' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'have loved taking' to show ongoing preference and 'used to take' for past habits; replace incorrect verbs and streamline phrases.

× So I definitely clicked picture and collected in my memory.

✓ So I definitely took pictures and kept them in my memory.

'Clicked picture' is nonstandard; 'clicked' can be used informally but needs plural 'pictures'. 'Collected in my memory' is unnatural; use 'kept them in my memory' or 'cherished them in my memory'. Use simple past 'took' for past actions. Suggestion: say 'I definitely took pictures and kept them in my memory.'

× I love the most view in rural area because the people are living the quite simple life so I love to enjoy the simple life and I clicked picture of the animals over there which they are having at their homes like dogs and like the old vehicles they are using.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas the most because people there live quite simple lives, so I enjoy the simple lifestyle, and I took pictures of the animals they keep at home, such as dogs, and of the old vehicles they use.

Multiple plural/singular errors: 'the most view' should be 'views the most'; 'rural area' should be plural or preceded by 'a' depending on meaning; 'people are living the quite simple life' -> 'people there live quite simple lives' (plural for lives). 'Clicked picture' -> 'took pictures'. 'animals over there which they are having at their homes' -> 'animals they keep at home'. Also adjust word order and articles. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking generally (views, rural areas, lives, pictures).

× So that one I prefer the most.

✓ So I prefer that the most.

Awkward pronoun placement: 'So that one I prefer the most' is understandable but unidiomatic. Better to say 'I prefer that the most' or 'I prefer that option the most.' Suggestion: place subject before verb for natural English: 'I prefer that the most.'

× Like in my country in India I like not travel very much so but I heard from my friends like they are having so much scenic view in my country.

✓ In my country, India, I don't travel very much, but I have heard from my friends that there are many scenic places there.

Tense and word order problems: 'I like not travel' is incorrect; use 'I don't travel very much.' 'I heard from my friends like they are having so much scenic view' should be 'I have heard from my friends that there are many scenic places.' Use present perfect 'have heard' to indicate information received, and 'there are' for existence of places. Suggestion: use negative auxiliary 'do not' for present simple negatives and 'there are' for plural existence.

× Like the inner Sam area there is like the mountains are quite beautiful over there.

✓ In the inner Himalaya region, the mountains are quite beautiful.

Unclear phrase 'inner Sam area' likely mispronunciation; I inferred 'inner Himalaya' or 'inner regions.' The original has redundant 'there is like the mountains are'; correct structure is 'the mountains are quite beautiful.' Suggestion: identify correct place name and use a clear noun phrase: 'In the inner [region name], the mountains are quite beautiful.'