Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your response clearer and more grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two concise reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Focus on correct verb forms and word order (e.g. "I prefer to stay in the moment" not "I prefer stay in the moments").

Example: No, I don't usually take photos of views. I prefer to stay in the moment and enjoy the scene, especially in the afternoon when the light is nice. For example, I like sitting and watching the sunset rather than photographing it.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct grammar: use proper verb forms and articles (e.g. "I enjoy" and "the city"). Add one concrete example to make your answer more vivid.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy and architecture of the city. For instance, seeing tall buildings, busy streets and large shopping centers makes me feel excited and inspired. Also, I like the variety of cafés and shops found only in cities.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize supporting details logically. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, and clearer references). Use linking words to explain reasons and add a specific example or intention. Avoid contradictory or confusing clauses like "my hometown have" or "I have not visited yet" without explanation.

Example: I prefer the views in my own country, especially my hometown, because of its rich culture. For example, there are historic temples and colorful festivals that I find very dramatic and beautiful. Although I haven't seen some cultural sites yet, I hope to visit them soon to experience their atmosphere.

× No, I don't like I much prefer stay in the moments I enjoying the for example, afternoon watching see, I like this that moment.

✓ No, I don't. I much prefer staying in the moment; for example, in the afternoon I enjoy watching and experiencing that moment.

This sentence has multiple sentence structure errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 26) and incorrect verb forms (types 8 and 6). The student mixed clauses and omitted necessary auxiliary verbs and prepositions. Suggestions: split into clear sentences, use 'I don't' to finish negative, use 'prefer' + gerund ('prefer staying'), use 'in the moment' (singular idiom), and use correct present simple 'I enjoy' for habitual actions. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26,26,8,6

× I prefer urban areas because huge buildings and shopping center views make me happy because I enjoying the civilization.

✓ I prefer urban areas because the huge buildings and shopping center views make me happy, and I enjoy the civilization.

Errors include missing article before 'huge buildings' and 'shopping center' (Article errors, ID 22/17) and incorrect verb form 'enjoying' instead of 'enjoy' (Present tense issue, ID 6 and Gerund issue ID 8). Also the sentence had redundancy and needed a conjunction. Suggestions: add 'the' when referring to specific things, use 'I enjoy' for a general statement, and connect ideas with 'and'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22,6,8

× Of course, my own country, especially my hometown, my hometown have very beautiful place like culture, but I have not visited yet, but I want to because cultural place is very dramatic.

✓ Of course my own country, especially my hometown. My hometown has very beautiful places and culture, but I have not visited some cultural sites yet; I want to because those cultural places are very dramatic.

This sentence shows singular/plural and subject-verb agreement errors (IDs 1 and 27) and awkward noun phrases. 'My hometown have' should be 'My hometown has' (subject-verb agreement). 'Beautiful place' should be plural 'places' to match context. Use 'cultural sites/places' and plural forms with 'are'. Also remove repeated 'but' and split into clearer sentences. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree ('hometown has'), match noun number to context ('places' not 'place'), and use consistent articles or demonstratives ('those cultural places'). Grammar Problem Type ID: 1,27