Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (“like”, repeated words), and give one or two specific details (where and why). Use linking words to connect ideas and keep answers under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like photographing rural places, such as flower parks and forests, because the natural colors and textures create peaceful compositions. For example, last month I photographed a flower meadow at sunrise, and the soft light made the images look very calm and vivid.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear words and repetitions, and choose accurate vocabulary (e.g., “coastal lake”, “flower fields”, “peaceful atmosphere”).

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones. Firstly, rural areas such as flower fields and lakes feel much quieter, which helps me relax. Secondly, the natural scenery often changes with the seasons, giving me more interesting subjects to photograph.

Suggestion: Answer directly and add specific details: name the place, describe two concrete features (e.g., beaches, local flowers), and explain why they appeal to you. Reduce hesitations and use correct grammar (e.g., "my home country" not "old country").

Example: I prefer views in my home country. For instance, in my home province there are long sandy beaches and unique native flowers that bloom in spring. These landscapes feel familiar and special to me because they are connected to my memories and local culture.

× Yeah, definitely a big yard for me.

✓ Yes, definitely; I really enjoy it.

The original sentence fragments and uses informal filler 'a big yard' which is unclear. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use a complete sentence that responds to the question: subject + verb + object. Suggestion: say 'I really enjoy taking pictures' or similar to be clear and grammatically correct.

× I I really love like taking a picture, especially in the like the rural area, like Flower Forest Park.

✓ I really love taking pictures, especially in rural areas, for example Flower Forest Park.

This contains multiple article and filler issues (ID 17). 'the rural area' is too specific; use 'rural areas' or 'the countryside'. Reduce filler words like 'like'. Use plural 'pictures' for general activity.

× Yeah, something like in the in the forest.

✓ For example, I like taking photos in the forest.

Fragment with repeated words and fillers (ID 26). Provide a complete clause with subject and verb. Remove duplicated 'in the' and 'something like'.

× So it's a different view. It's very help me very good.

✓ So it offers different views. It helps me a lot.

Awkward structure and incorrect phrase 'very help me very good' (ID 26). Use proper verb 'helps' and adverb 'a lot' to express benefit.

× Oh definitely I am into the like rural area like I can say foreign flower with the flower incest lake yeah something what what whatever in the in the forehead or about its concern about the environment yes something like that and also.

✓ Oh, definitely I prefer rural areas. For example, places with wildflowers, lakes, and forests; I care about the environment.

This is a run-on, unclear sentence with many fillers and nonsensical phrases (ID 26). Separate ideas into clearer clauses, remove fillers like 'like' and 'what what whatever', and replace unclear words ('forehead', 'flower incest') with meaningful nouns such as 'forests' or 'wildflowers'.

× Ah, well, I I I don't really know that I actually, I prefer the view in my old country.

✓ Well, I don't really know, but I prefer the views in my home country.

Tense and word choice are awkward (ID 6). Use present simple for general preferences: 'I prefer.' 'Old country' is odd; use 'home country' or 'my country'.

× Yeah, it's some provinces.

✓ There are several provinces.

Incorrect singular/plural and phrasing (ID 1). 'It's some provinces' mixes singular 'it is' with plural 'provinces'. Use 'There are' or 'Some provinces are'.

× It's have like especially the beautiful beach with their beautiful and like significant flower and the like very special.

✓ They have especially beautiful beaches, notable flowers, and other unique features.

Awkward and incorrect adjective/adverb usage (ID 13). 'It's have' is ungrammatical; use 'They have' to match plural 'provinces'. Avoid repeating 'beautiful' and 'like'. Use parallel noun phrases for clarity.