Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, remove fillers (“you know”), correct grammar, and add one specific supporting detail. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. Whenever I travel abroad, I take photos to capture special moments and preserve memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets in new cities because they remind me of that trip later on.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and vague phrases. Provide a clear preference (topic sentence), give two specific reasons with linking words, and finish the thought. Use varied vocabulary instead of repeating “like.” Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer photographing urban views because cities offer diverse architecture and lively street scenes. For instance, I enjoy capturing historic buildings and busy markets, which provide interesting details and vibrant colours. Therefore, urban areas give me more creative photo opportunities.

Suggestion: State the preference clearly, avoid filler words and small errors, and support your answer with a specific reason and an example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a linking phrase to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new landscapes and cultures. For example, I like exploring street markets and coastal scenery abroad, which feel more novel compared with places I’ve already visited at home.

× I really enjoy taking pictures of different views.

✓ I really enjoy taking pictures of different views.

No correction needed; the present simple 'enjoy' is correctly followed by the gerund 'taking'. Keep as is.

× Every time I go to a foreign country, I really like to take the pictures since it you know you really like catch the moment and you can also remember this exact moment in the future.

✓ Every time I go to a foreign country, I really like to take pictures since, you know, you really want to capture the moment and you can remember it in the future.

Multiple issues: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'pictures' and awkward phrasing 'it you know you really like catch the moment'. This is a sentence structure error. Replace 'the pictures' with 'pictures' (article error but within structure) use 'you know' set off by commas, use 'want to capture' for natural intent and add pronoun 'it' to refer to 'the moment'. Suggest speaking in shorter clauses and using 'capture' for 'catch' in this context.

× In my opinion rural rural areas are sort of boring since you don't really have much to see unless it's like in the mountains or like by the beach for example.

✓ In my opinion, rural areas are a bit boring because you do not have much to see unless you are in the mountains or by the beach, for example.

The repeated 'rural' is a speech disfluency; this falls under sentence structure errors. Also 'it's like in the mountains' is informal and ungrammatical here. Insert a comma after the introductory phrase, remove repetition, use 'are a bit boring' or 'are somewhat boring', and use 'unless you are in the mountains' to make the clause grammatical. Replace 'like' filler words and avoid double 'for example' redundancy.

× But I I enjoy taking pictures in urban areas more since it has like.

✓ But I enjoy taking pictures in urban areas more, since they have more interesting scenes.

Original contains repetition 'I I', an incomplete clause 'since it has like.' This is a sentence structure issue and involves verb + -ing already correct earlier. Correct by removing repeated word, completing the thought and matching plural 'areas' with plural pronoun 'they' and 'have' rather than 'it has'. Use 'more' to compare preferences.

× I prefer those in other countries since I've already seen a lot of views in my own country, so I'd like to explore.

✓ I prefer those in other countries since I've already seen many views in my own country, so I'd like to explore.

'A lot of' is conversational but acceptable; prefer 'many' for formality. No major grammatical error; categorized as article/quantifier style. Suggest using 'many' or 'a lot of' consistently. No tense change needed.

× I'm also a more adventurous P person when it comes to exploring new places.

✓ I'm also a more adventurous person when it comes to exploring new places.

There is an extraneous 'P' mis-typed within the noun 'person', which is a pronoun/noun error. Remove the stray letter. Sentence otherwise correct. Suggest slower speech or proofreading to avoid typographical insertions.