Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid repetition and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting reasons using linking words. Also correct small grammatical slips (e.g., double 'the', singular/plural).

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially landscapes rather than people. For example, when I travel I like capturing scenery because it helps me remember the place’s atmosphere and unique features.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific reasons. Remove excessive fillers and repetition. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and provide concrete details (e.g., quieter, more nature, open skies). Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they are quieter and more natural. For example, in the countryside I can photograph fields, forests, and open skies, whereas cities often have crowded streets and tall buildings that block the view.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid vague phrases and repetition. Correct grammar (singular/plural, word order) and give one or two specific reasons or examples why you prefer your country (e.g., types of landscapes, historic sites). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best places and have many memories there. For example, my country has coastal cliffs, mountain trails, and historic towns, so I can capture a wide variety of landscapes without traveling abroad.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. Moreover, I especially love taking pictures of the view, pictures of the view rather than taking pictures of the the people.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. Moreover, I especially love taking pictures of views rather than taking pictures of people.

The original repeats phrases and includes an unnecessary definite article and extra word 'the'. Use the plural 'views' to match 'different views' and omit duplicate words. Also remove the extra 'the' before 'people'. This fixes clarity and redundancy issues. Suggestion: Say 'taking pictures of views rather than people.'

× Because what's the point of, uh, visiting a place when you are taking just your own pictures?

✓ What's the point of visiting a place if you are just taking pictures of yourself?

Beginning the sentence with 'Because' is unnecessary and informal here; it creates a fragment when connected to previous sentence. Also 'taking just your own pictures' is awkward; 'taking pictures of yourself' or 'just taking your own pictures' is clearer. Rephrase to a full question beginning with 'What's the point of...'. Suggestion: Use 'if' instead of 'when' for hypothetical critique and place 'just' before 'taking' or before 'pictures' for clarity.

× Uh, definitely, I prefer views of a rural areas over urban areas because, uh, urban, urban areas provide, uh, different landscapes And, uh, you can see, uh, very far because in uh, uh, urban areas, uh, you just see.

✓ Uh, definitely, I prefer views of rural areas over urban areas because rural areas provide different landscapes, and you can see very far; in urban areas you just see buildings.

The phrase 'a rural areas' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'areas' (article error). Also repeated filler words and lack of parallelism reduce clarity. Replace 'a rural areas' with 'rural areas'. The meaning is unclear at the end; add 'buildings' (or another noun) to complete the contrast. Remove extra 'and' capitalization and fillers. Suggestion: Say 'I prefer views of rural areas... because rural areas provide different landscapes and long-distance views.'

× Well, I prefer in my own countries since I've never been to any other other country.

✓ Well, I prefer my own country since I've never been to any other country.

Incorrect preposition 'prefer in' should be 'prefer my' or 'prefer in my' with different structure. Also 'countries' (plural) is inconsistent with 'my own' and 'other country'; use singular 'country'. Remove duplicate 'other'. Suggestion: Say 'I prefer my own country'.

× Also I consider my country is one of the beauty, most beautiful country in the world, which offers different landscapes, different views of nature, historic movement.

✓ Also, I consider my country to be one of the most beautiful countries in the world; it offers various landscapes, different natural views, and historical sites.

The phrase 'one of the beauty, most beautiful country' is grammatically incorrect. Use the structure 'one of the most beautiful countries' (plural 'countries' after 'one of the'). 'Consider my country is' should be 'consider my country to be' or 'think my country is'. 'Historic movement' is unclear; likely intended 'historical sites' or 'historic landmarks'. Adjust nouns to plural where appropriate and improve word choice for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'one of the most beautiful countries' and list concrete elements like 'landscapes' and 'historical sites'.