Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, correct grammar and use clear vocabulary to express feelings. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like "more difficult" or "shock."

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I photograph a sunrise or a mountain landscape, it makes me feel happy and excited because of the beautiful colors and peaceful atmosphere.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons and one brief example. Use correct grammar (articles, singular/plural, verb forms) and linking words such as "because" or "for example." Avoid repetition of simple adjectives like "very" and "good."

Example: I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because the countryside is usually quieter and more scenic. For example, photographing fields and small villages helps me relax and capture natural light and colours that I can't find in busy cities.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a specific reason. Use correct sentence structure and linking words like "because" or "although." Be specific about what you like about your country's views (e.g., landscapes, climate, culture) and avoid vague phrases like "so wonderful."

Example: Although many countries have beautiful scenery, I prefer views in my own country because I know the places well and they feel peaceful and familiar. For example, I love the coastal cliffs near my hometown because they offer dramatic sunsets and calm walking paths.

× I really like taking pictures of different view because whenever I taking picture of different views it will give me a more difficult like happy uh, shock yes.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views because whenever I take pictures of different views it makes me feel happy and excited.

The sentence contains incorrect noun/adjective forms and verb forms. 'Different view' should be plural 'different views' to match 'pictures'. 'Whenever I taking picture' uses an incorrect verb form; the correct present tense is 'I take pictures'. 'It will give me a more difficult like happy uh, shock yes' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'it makes me feel happy and excited'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when appropriate, use simple present tense for habitual actions, and choose clear adjectives (happy, excited) without filler words.'

× To be honest, I prefer view of a rural areas to view of urban areas because whenever I taking picture in rural areas, I will feel very comfortable and happy because the view is very good and very peaceful.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views of rural areas to views of urban areas because whenever I take pictures in rural areas, I feel very comfortable and happy since the scenery is beautiful and peaceful.

Multiple tense and number issues: 'prefer view of a rural areas' should be 'prefer views of rural areas' (plural and no extra article). 'Whenever I taking picture' is wrong; use simple present 'I take pictures' for habitual actions. 'I will feel' is unnecessary future; use present 'I feel' for general truths. Also 'the view is very good and very peaceful' is awkward; use 'the scenery is beautiful and peaceful'. Suggestion: match plural nouns with context, use simple present for habits, and choose natural adjectives.'

× In the world have many countries have a wonderful view, but with me I prefer views in my own country than other countries because in my country is very peaceful beauty and also is so wonderful.

✓ There are many countries in the world with wonderful scenery, but I prefer the views in my own country to those in other countries because my country is very peaceful and beautiful.

Problems include word order and preposition use. Start with 'There are' to introduce existence. 'In the world have many countries have' is incorrect word order. Use 'many countries in the world' and 'with wonderful scenery'. 'I prefer views in my own country than other countries' requires 'prefer X to Y' and comparison pronoun 'those in other countries'. 'In my country is very peaceful beauty and also is so wonderful' lacks subject and uses wrong noun; use 'my country is very peaceful and beautiful'. Suggestion: use 'There are' for existence, 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons, and ensure complete clauses with subjects and verbs.'