Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g. 'Sky' not 'Skype'), and limit to 3–4 short sentences. Add one specific detail (when or where you take photos) and a linking word to connect ideas. Also correct grammar (use present simple and noun forms) and avoid filler phrases.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially the sky. Since childhood I have loved photographing sunsets and clouds because they make me feel calm. For example, I often take photos at the beach at dusk to capture the changing colours, which helps me relax and reduces stress.

Suggestion: Answer directly then give specific reasons with linking words. Replace vague or incorrect expressions (e.g. 'birds murmuring', 'in that mother') with precise language. Use two supporting details (sounds, weather, scenery) and one example of a favourite rural scene. Keep sentences to 2–4 and grammatically correct.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more natural. For instance, I enjoy hearing birdsong and watching sunsets over fields, which feel peaceful and inspirational. Therefore I often go to the countryside to photograph wide landscapes and small details like wildflowers.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific reasons linked logically. Avoid hesitations and unclear words (e.g. 'big ***'). Provide one comparative point about other countries and one concrete example of a favourite local scene. Use correct grammar and limit length to 3–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I grew up here and know the best spots. For example, I love photographing the sunrise over the local hills where the light and breeze are beautiful. While views abroad can be interesting, my home landscapes feel more familiar and meaningful to me.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of the different views, especially Skype, I don't know why.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially the sky; I don't know why.

The student used 'the different views' and 'Skype' incorrectly. 'Different views' does not require the definite article 'the' here. 'Skype' is a proper noun for a software and incorrect for 'sky'; the correct word is 'sky'. Also sentences were run together; using a semicolon or separate clauses improves clarity.

× From my childhood I love Skype because I know it is my favorite person painting it for me Sky, which gives me peace, which helps me to boost my stress, make me calm and it is a different feeling whenever I look up to the sky, the main.

✓ Since childhood I have loved the sky because it feels like a painting to me; it gives me peace, helps reduce my stress, calms me, and gives me a special feeling whenever I look up at the sky.

Multiple problems: tense and structure. 'From my childhood I love' should be 'Since childhood I have loved' (present perfect to show a state from past to present). 'Skype' should be 'sky'. 'Favorite person painting it for me' is unclear; corrected to 'feels like a painting to me'. Parallelism fixed: use verbs and phrases consistently ('gives', 'helps reduce', 'calms'). Prepositions corrected ('look up at the sky'). Sentence was long and fragmented; breaking into clearer clauses improves readability.

× Yes, I prefer views, especially in rural areas.

✓ Yes, I prefer views, especially those in rural areas.

Adding 'those' clarifies which views are preferred. This fixes a vague reference and improves precision. The original is not strictly ungrammatical but clearer with the demonstrative.

× Why? It is because whenever I see any different views like birds murmuring or the raining or sunset, everything in rural areas, it gives me something pleasant in me which helps me to see through my own lens in that mother.

✓ Whenever I see different views, such as birds chirping, rain, or a sunset in rural areas, it gives me a pleasant feeling that helps me see through my own lens.

Several article and word choice errors: 'any different views' -> 'different views'; 'birds murmuring' -> 'birds chirping' (better collocation); 'the raining' -> 'rain'; 'in that mother' is incorrect and removed. Sentence structure made concise; 'something pleasant in me' changed to 'a pleasant feeling' for natural English. 'Helps me to see through my own lens' simplified to 'helps me see through my own lens' (infinitive without 'to' optional but more natural here).

× Of course I prefer views in my country, it is the place where I was born and brought up and definitely it is a big *** to view some beautiful views like sunset, sunrise and the nature's pleasant breeze.

✓ Of course I prefer views in my country; it is the place where I was born and raised, and it is wonderful to see beautiful things like the sunrise, the sunset, and the pleasant breeze of nature.

Problems: run-on sentence and awkward phrases. 'Brought up' is acceptable but 'raised' is more natural here. 'Big ***' was unclear; replaced with 'wonderful'. 'Nature's pleasant breeze' changed to 'the pleasant breeze of nature' for correct possessive and natural word order. Articles added for 'the sunrise' and 'the sunset'. Tenses kept present simple to express general preference.

× Everything in my own country, which helps me to see that scenic beauty through my lens and help me to photograph.

✓ Everything in my country helps me see that scenic beauty through my lens and helps me take photographs.

Relative clause misuse and verb agreement: 'Everything in my own country, which helps me to see...' is a fragment; revised to a main clause. 'Help me to photograph' is awkward; use 'helps me take photographs'. Ensured subject-verb agreement ('helps' with singular 'everything') and parallel verbs ('helps me see' and 'helps me take').