Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear. Start with a short topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar, avoid repetition, and keep it under five sentences. For example, say you enjoy photographing landscapes because you like nature and explain where or how often you take photos.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing natural scenery because it helps me relax, and I often take photos when I visit parks or hill stations. For example, last month I took several landscape shots at a nearby national park and later edited them to improve color and composition.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference and justify it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and correct vocabulary (mountainous, urban, rural). Avoid unfinished sentences and keep to a maximum of five sentences.

Example: I prefer rural and mountainous areas to urban views because they offer more varied natural scenery and peaceful atmospheres. For example, I like the contrast of ridgelines, valleys and forests which are hard to find in cities. Because of the quiet surroundings, I can take my time composing photographs and enjoy nature.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and use clear wording. State a preference (own country or other countries) and give concrete reasons or examples. Avoid incorrect words (e.g., 'pimples') and ambiguous phrases. Keep sentences short and coherent, and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because India has a tremendous variety of landscapes, from mountains to beaches. For instance, I enjoy photographing the Himalayan foothills and tropical beaches in my state, so I don’t always need to travel abroad to find beautiful scenery.

× As I'm a person to watch different types of sceneries and nature, so definitely I I often do many more activities about different views and make more innovative.

✓ As I enjoy looking at different kinds of scenery and nature, I often do many activities related to views and try to be more creative.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and subject expressions ('As I'm a person to watch' is unnatural) and repeats 'I'. Replace with 'As I enjoy looking at' to express preference. Use 'kinds of scenery' (scenery is uncountable) and simplify structure. Remove redundant 'so' and duplicate 'I'. Use parallel structure 'do many activities related to views and try to be more creative.' Suggestion: keep subject-verb clarity and avoid repetition.

× So basically I preferred mountain urban areas.

✓ So basically I prefer mountainous urban areas.

The student used past tense 'preferred' while answering a general preference question; present simple 'prefer' is required. Also 'mountain urban areas' is awkward; 'mountainous urban areas' more accurately describes urban areas in or near mountains. Use present tense for habitual or general preferences.

× The reason behind that is it is very much innovative place where there can be more precious and different types of sceneries and you can get an effective and.

✓ The reason is that such places are very interesting and can offer many unique kinds of scenery and memorable experiences.

The original is grammatically incomplete ('and you can get an effective and.') and uses incorrect word choices ('innovative place', 'precious sceneries'). Restructure the sentence: use 'The reason is that' + plural verb 'are' for 'places', replace 'innovative' with 'interesting' or 'unique', and complete the thought 'memorable experiences.' Ensure sentence is complete with a clear object.

× As my country India is known as a natured country so I like to watch this type of pimples in my country and and news and day by day innovative and fluent in the future.

✓ Since my country, India, is known for its natural beauty, I like to see these kinds of places in my country, and I hope they will become more developed and attractive over time.

The original uses incorrect pronouns and words ('natured country', 'pimples', 'and and news', 'fluent'). 'Known as a natured country' should be 'known for its natural beauty.' 'Pimples' is likely a wrong word for 'places' or 'sceneries'. Remove repeated 'and' and replace unclear fragments with a coherent hope about future development: 'become more developed and attractive over time.' Also add commas around 'India' as apposition.