Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition, filler words (“umm”), and incorrect structures (e.g., “I really interested” → “I’m really interested”).

Example: I’m really interested in taking pictures of different views. For example, I like to photograph landscapes and cityscapes and post them on social media so I can remember trips I’ve taken. Also, when I take photos I pay attention to light and composition, which helps me improve my photography.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer then support it with two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer rural areas” not “I would rather views in rural areas”) and finish the sentence fully—avoid trailing off.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas. Firstly, they are less polluted, so the air and colours look cleaner. Secondly, rural landscapes such as forests and farms offer more variety in textures and peaceful scenes, which I find more beautiful.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases and repetition; give a brief reason and, if possible, one example. Use singular/plural agreement (e.g., “each country has its own”).

Example: I can’t really choose between them because each country has its own unique attractions. For example, my city has historic architecture and local festivals that are special to it, while other countries might offer different natural landscapes or cultural experiences.

× Yes, I really interested, yes, I really interested in capturing beautiful sceneries and I want to post them on social medias and umm, it is that way that I can remember, for example, trips that I went before. So I really like to take, I like taking pictures.

✓ Yes, I am really interested in capturing beautiful scenery, and I want to post them on social media because that way I can remember, for example, trips I went on before. So I really like taking pictures.

The learner omitted the verb 'to be' required with the adjective 'interested' (use 'am interested') and used plural forms incorrectly ('scenery' is usually uncountable; 'social media' is the correct term). Also awkward phrase 'it is that way that' was replaced with 'because that way' for naturalness. Suggestions: include the appropriate form of 'be' with adjectives (I am interested), use uncountable nouns correctly (scenery, social media), and simplify connective phrases for clarity.

× I would rather views in rural areas because they are less polluted and they are most beautiful scenery in my opinion because of their forests, farms and very.

✓ I would rather view rural areas because they are less polluted and have the most beautiful scenery in my opinion because of their forests and farms.

The phrase 'would rather' requires a verb, not a noun (use 'would rather view' or better 'prefer') and 'views' vs 'scenery' number mismatch: 'scenery' is uncountable so use 'the most beautiful scenery' and 'very' is incomplete. Also 'they have' is needed instead of 'they are' when describing possession of scenery. Suggestions: use 'prefer' or 'would rather' + base verb (I prefer rural areas / I would rather live in rural areas), treat 'scenery' as uncountable, and complete lists without trailing words.

× I think each country has their own beautiful sides and you can't choose between them because maybe my city have, uh, views that another country doesn't have it, so I can't choose between them.

✓ I think each country has its own beautiful side and you can't choose between them because maybe my city has views that another country doesn't, so I can't choose between them.

Mismatch in pronoun number: 'each country' is singular and should take singular possessive 'its' not 'their'. 'City' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. Also the clause 'doesn't have it' is redundant; use 'doesn't' or 'doesn't have' without 'it'. Suggestions: match singular subjects with singular pronouns and verbs (each country ... its; my city has), and avoid redundant pronouns at the end of clauses.