Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ, tránh lỗi đánh máy, và làm câu rõ ràng hơn. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn trả lời trực tiếp, rồi thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ loại cảnh bạn chụp, khi nào bạn xem lại ảnh). Tránh dùng từ thừa và sửa các lỗi như “opt” thành “out” hoặc xóa, và cấu trúc “take photos as mountains and streets” thành “take photos of mountains and streets”.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me relax and reminds me of places I visit. For example, when I travel I often take pictures of mountains and street scenes, and later I look at them to remember the trip.

Suggestion: Cải thiện phát âm/nhập nhằng từ và ngữ pháp số ít/số nhiều, đồng thời rút gọn câu để rõ ràng. Bỏ từ thừa như lặp “I I”, sửa “more peoples” thành “fewer people” hoặc “less crowded”, và dùng liên từ hợp lý (e.g., “however”) để so sánh nông thôn và thành phố. Nên có 1 câu chủ đề + 1 câu giải thích + 1 câu ví dụ ngắn.

Example: I prefer rural areas because they are less crowded and have fresher air, so I can relax. For example, I usually go to the countryside at weekends to unwind and take photos. However, I also enjoy city views when I want to visit nice restaurants or see modern architecture.

Suggestion: Sửa ngữ pháp (thời gian và động từ), tránh cụm từ không chính xác như “views about” và lỗi động từ “often goes”. Bắt đầu trực tiếp rồi giải thích cụ thể lý do (ký ức, gia đình) và kết thúc bằng một câu đối chiếu ngắn với trải nghiệm ở nước ngoài. Giữ tổng cộng không quá 4–5 câu.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and hold special memories for me. For example, I love the mountain scenery near my hometown and often go there to relax with my family. Nevertheless, I sometimes enjoy views abroad because they are different and exciting.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it's relaxing and helps me remember places.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it's relaxing and helps me remember places.

No correction needed. The sentence correctly uses present simple tense to describe general preferences and habitual actions.

× For example, when I travel opt I often take photos as mountains and streets and I look at them later.

✓ For example, when I travel I often take photos of mountains and streets and look at them later.

Original sentence has extra word 'opt', wrong preposition 'as', and an unnecessary repeated subject in the second clause. Remove 'opt', change 'as' to 'of' to indicate what is photographed, and use 'look at them later' with no repeated subject for smoother structure.

× Whilst I I prefer rural areas because they are more peoples and have a fresh air and I can relax there.

✓ While I prefer rural areas because there are more people, the air is fresher and I can relax there.

'Whilst' is acceptable but 'While' is more natural here; the sentence repeated 'I'. 'More peoples' is incorrect plural; use 'more people'. 'Have a fresh air' is wrong: use 'the air is fresher' or 'the air is fresh'. Also combine clauses with commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× For example I usually go to the country choice on weekends to work and take photo but I also enjoy city views when I want nice restaurant or modern buildings.

✓ For example, I usually go to the countryside on weekends to relax and take photos, but I also enjoy city views when I want a nice restaurant or modern buildings.

'Country choice' is incorrect; use 'countryside'. 'To work' conflicted with context; likely 'to relax'. 'Take photo' should be plural 'take photos'. Missing article 'a' before 'nice restaurant'. Add commas to separate clauses.

× Well, I prefer views in my own country because I feel familiar and they have a special meaning for me.

✓ Well, I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and have a special meaning for me.

Use 'they feel familiar' to describe the views (plural subject). 'I feel familiar' would mean the speaker feels familiar, which is incorrect. Maintain present simple to describe a general preference.

× For example, I love the mountains scenery near my hometown and often goes to relax with my family.

✓ For example, I love the mountain scenery near my hometown and often go to relax with my family.

'Mountains scenery' should be 'mountain scenery' (uncountable or adjective + noun). 'Often goes' is wrong because subject 'I' requires 'go'. Use present simple 'go' for habitual action.

× But sometimes I also enjoy views about when I travel because they are different and exciting.

✓ But sometimes I also enjoy the views I see when I travel because they are different and exciting.

'Enjoy views about' is ungrammatical. Use 'the views I see' or 'views when I travel'. Adding 'the' specifies the views and 'I see' clarifies the relationship. Maintain present simple 'are' for general statements.