Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ “taking picture” → “taking pictures”, “they have me remember place” → “they help me remember places”) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Nên thêm ví dụ cụ thể hơn về một khung cảnh hoặc cảm xúc khi chụp để phong phú nội dung.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of both natural and urban scenes because they capture memories. For instance, when I travel I often photograph mountain views and street markets, then save the best shots on my phone so I can look back on the trip.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp (“I'm acting” không đúng, “which many people” thiếu ý). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, lý do cụ thể và 1 ví dụ ngắn. Sử dụng từ số ít/ số nhiều chính xác và liên từ để kết nối ý.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because I like the modern architecture and the lively atmosphere. For example, city skylines and busy streets with cafes often catch my attention and offer interesting photo opportunities.

Suggestion: Cần loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng và sửa lỗi đại từ/ trật tự từ (“you in my our country” → “those in my country”). Nêu rõ lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: familiar culture, variety of landscapes) và thêm một chi tiết hỗ trợ. Giữ câu ngắn gọn và tự nhiên.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are very beautiful and green. For example, local parks and countryside areas are familiar to me and offer peaceful scenery that I enjoy photographing.

× Yes, wow, I like taking picture of different views.

✓ Yes, wow, I like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'different views' implies more than one image and English requires plural form for countable nouns when referring to multiple items. Use 'a picture' only for one image, otherwise use 'pictures'. Suggestion: Use plural for countable nouns when referring to more than one (taking pictures).

× I enjoy photographing natural and city scenes because they are interesting and they have me remember place.

✓ I enjoy photographing natural and city scenes because they are interesting and they help me remember places.

The phrase 'have me remember place' is incorrect. 'Have' plus object plus base verb is used in causative constructions (e.g., 'have me do something') but not here. The correct verb is 'help' + object + base verb (help me remember). Additionally, 'place' should be plural 'places' to match 'natural and city scenes' and indicate multiple locations. Suggestion: Use 'help me remember places' for clarity.

× For example, I often take photos when I travel and I keep them on my phone.

✓ For example, I often take photos when I travel and keep them on my phone.

The sentence is mostly correct but repeating 'I' before 'keep' is unnecessary; in present simple parallel actions you can omit the second subject. This is a stylistic improvement rather than strict grammatical error. Suggestion: Use parallel structure: 'I often take photos ... and keep them ...'.

× I'm acting I prefer views in urban area because it's modern and interesting which many people.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in urban areas because they are modern and interesting to many people.

'I'm acting' is incorrect here — likely intended 'actually'. 'Urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' when speaking generally. 'It's modern and interesting which many people' is ungrammatical; use 'they are modern and interesting to many people' to refer to 'views' and express the idea correctly. Suggestion: Use 'actually' for correction and ensure subject agreement and proper clause 'interesting to many people'.

× MMM I think uh, I prefer you in my our country because landscape is very beautiful and green.

✓ I think I prefer to stay in my own country because the landscape is very beautiful and green.

The original contains several pronoun errors: 'I prefer you' is incorrect and should reflect the speaker's preference (e.g., 'I prefer to stay' or 'I prefer views'). 'my our country' mixes pronouns; use 'my own country'. Also 'landscape' needs the definite article 'the' when speaking generally about the country's landscape. Suggestion: Use 'my own country' and include 'the' before 'landscape', and choose a verb that fits the question (e.g., 'prefer views in' or 'prefer to stay in').