Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles, verb forms) and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often take pictures with friends and family during special moments, and when I travel I photograph local scenery to remember the trip.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first (urban or rural), then support it with clear, specific reasons. Use linking words (because, for example) and correct collocations (e.g., 'grew up in the countryside', 'facilities', 'wildlife'). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural areas because I grew up in the countryside and enjoy the open space. For example, there are more natural sights and wildlife to photograph, and the slower pace allows me to explore hobbies and careers related to nature.

Suggestion: Answer directly (own country or other countries) and give clear, specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect word choices. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct country names. Limit to a few concise sentences.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures. For example, seeing Germany or the United States felt like a dream to me; their architecture and scenery were unlike anything at home, which made my trips unforgettable.

× Yes, I like taking picture with my friends or with my relatives, with every sweet moments.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures with my friends or with my relatives, at every sweet moment.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match the activity of taking multiple photos (singular/plural agreement). 'Moments' should be singular 'moment' when used with 'every'. Also use preposition 'with' -> 'at' for occasions: 'at every sweet moment' or keep 'in every sweet moment' for better collocation.

× Even when I have travel around the world, I want to take some pictures the scenery there.

✓ Even when I travel around the world, I want to take some pictures of the scenery there.

Use base verb 'travel' for present simple after 'when I' (not 'have travel'). Also include preposition 'of' after 'pictures' to show what is being photographed: 'pictures of the scenery'. The original had incorrect verb form and missing preposition.

× Open areas of cultural I was born and grew up in open areas where I can develop myself and there are a lot of modern functions and a lot of things for me to discover and develop myself.

✓ I was born and grew up in open cultural areas where I could develop myself; there were a lot of modern facilities and many things for me to discover and learn.

The original sentence has poor word order and repetition. 'Open areas of cultural' should be 'open cultural areas'. Tenses should be consistent: use past 'was born and grew up' and then past 'could'/'were' to describe that time. 'Functions' is incorrect collocation; use 'facilities' or 'amenities'. Remove repeated phrase 'develop myself' or change second occurrence to 'learn'.

× Even it's easier for me to find some creatures and occupations that is really suitable with myself.

✓ Also, it's easier for me to find some creatures and jobs that are really suitable for me.

Pronoun and agreement errors: 'that is' should be 'that are' to agree with plural 'creatures and jobs'. 'Occupations' can be 'jobs'. Use 'suitable for me' rather than 'suitable with myself'. 'Myself' is incorrect reflexive pronoun here.

× I bought live fuels in my countries and other countries such as Germany and July, the Kingdom, it's had a dream.

✓ I have lived in my country and in other countries such as Germany and the United Kingdom; it has been like a dream.

'Bought live fuels' is incorrect; likely intended 'lived'. Use present perfect 'have lived' to indicate experience. 'My countries' should be 'my country'. 'July, the Kingdom' is unclear; likely 'the United Kingdom'. Use semicolon or conjunction to join clauses and correct 'it's had a dream' to 'it has been like a dream'.

× It's like a dream because I when I see the view in other countries such as like Kingdom and the United States, I can't believe about in my eyes.

✓ It's like a dream because when I see the views in other countries such as the United Kingdom and the United States, I can't believe my eyes.

Remove extra 'I' after 'because'. Use 'views' plural to match context. Use correct country name 'the United Kingdom'. The phrase 'can't believe about in my eyes' is incorrect; correct idiom is 'can't believe my eyes'. Also remove redundant 'like'.