Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and finish the thought with a specific detail about what photography improves. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I do. Photography is one of my favorite hobbies because it makes me more creative and improves my observation skills. For example, when I look for interesting compositions I notice small details in light and texture, which helps me see the world differently.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and develop it with specific supporting details and linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences—combine short fragments into full sentences and give reasons or examples to support your preference.

Example: I prefer photographing rural areas because I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and natural subjects. For instance, I like capturing domestic animals and quaint cottages, and I often use soft morning light to create a calm mood in my photos.

Suggestion: Answer directly, avoid contradicting statements and reduce filler words. Start with a clear position, then give a concise reason with a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

Example: I generally prefer photographing in my own country because I can communicate with locals about good viewpoints and hidden locations. For example, I once asked a resident for directions to a scenic hill and discovered a beautiful spot for sunset photos.

× I think, uh, it can make me more creative and it can help me improve my uh.

✓ I think it makes me more creative and helps me improve my skills.

The original sentence is incomplete and redundant. 'I think, uh, it can make me more creative and it can help me improve my uh.' lacks an object after 'improve' and repeats 'it can'. This is a sentence structure error (type 26). Use parallel verbs with correct objects: 'it makes me more creative and helps me improve my skills.' Remove filler 'uh' for clarity and conciseness.

× To be honest, I prefer to take a photo from rural areas I think.

✓ To be honest, I think I prefer taking photos in rural areas.

This sentence misuses the prepositions 'from' and has awkward word order. 'Take a photo from rural areas' is incorrect; use 'in rural areas' (type 11). Also change 'to take a photo' to the gerund 'taking photos' for natural expression and place 'I think' earlier for clarity.

× Of the atmosphere of rural.

✓ I like the relaxed atmosphere of rural areas.

The fragment 'Of the atmosphere of rural.' is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb (type 26). Supply a full clause: 'I like the relaxed atmosphere of rural areas.' This corrects sentence structure and clarifies meaning.

× Really enjoy taking pictures from domestic animals or beautiful cottages.

✓ I really enjoy taking pictures of domestic animals and beautiful cottages.

The original uses the wrong preposition 'from' with 'taking pictures' and lacks a subject (type 11 and 26). Use 'of' after 'taking pictures' and include 'I' as the subject. Also replace 'or' with 'and' if both are enjoyed.

× To be honest, uh, it doesn't matter for me, but, uh, I prefer my own country because I can ask, uh, the residents in my own language about the sceneries and, uh, uh, specific, uh, location in that areas.

✓ To be honest, it doesn't matter to me, but I prefer my own country because I can ask residents about the scenery and specific locations in my own language.

Multiple issues: 'matter for me' should be 'matter to me' (preposition) and 'sceneries' is uncountable so use 'scenery'. 'In that areas' is wrong; use 'in those areas' or 'in my own country.' Also reduce fillers. This mainly involves modal/phrase usage and preposition errors, but the dominant correction addresses preposition and noun form (type 4 and 11). The sentence also had unnecessary repetitions and awkward word order; revised sentence clarifies meaning and corrects grammar.