Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct basic grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (e.g., “MMM”) and correct verb forms and plurality (picture → pictures; view → views). For clarity, mention why photos matter to you and give a short example of what you photograph and when.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember places and moments. For example, when I travel I usually photograph landscapes and busy city streets with my phone, so I can look back at the atmosphere and details later.

Suggestion: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence stating your preference (or that you like both), then support it with specific, accurate comparisons using linking words (however, because, while). Correct factual errors (urban areas often have more pollution than rural). Use precise vocabulary (pollution, peaceful, traditional). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I like both urban and rural views for different reasons. Urban areas offer lively streets and interesting architecture, while rural areas are peaceful and natural; however, I usually prefer rural scenes because they are quieter and less polluted.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give clear reasons with specific examples. Begin with a topic sentence (I prefer views in my own country) then add one or two concrete examples (types of landscapes, famous sites or cultural scenes) and avoid vague or incorrect phrases (’a museum about the human Vietnam’). Use linking words like for example and because. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has a wide variety of scenery and rich cultural sites. For example, you can photograph terraced rice fields in the north, historic streets in Hoi An, and lively markets in Ho Chi Minh City, which all offer very photogenic scenes.

× Well MMM yes I like taking picture of different view because they help me remember place and moment.

✓ Well, yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they help me remember places and moments.

Use plural nouns after 'taking' when speaking generally: 'pictures' and 'views'. Also use plural 'places' and 'moments' to match 'they'. Add commas for natural speech. Suggestion: practice forming gerund phrases with plural nouns for general statements.

× For example I when I travel I usually take photo of landscape and city street with my phone and I look.

✓ For example, when I travel I usually take photos of landscapes and city streets with my phone and look at them later.

Sentence needs reordering: move 'when I travel' after 'For example,'. Use plural nouns 'photos', 'landscapes', 'city streets'. The verb phrase 'look at them later' completes the idea; 'look' alone is incomplete. Suggestion: ensure clauses are in logical order and include necessary objects after verbs.

× I think that I like both because in the urban area it's very fresh a fresh not not air pollution than rural area, but rural is a modern and simple OK.

✓ I think I like both because the air in urban areas is not as fresh as in rural areas, but rural areas are more modern and simple.

Use 'the air' to refer to specific air quality. Compare with 'not as...as' structure for comparisons. Use plural 'urban areas' and 'rural areas' for general statements. Remove filler words and repetitions. Suggestion: use standard comparative patterns 'not as ADJ as' and keep nouns consistent in number.

× I think that I love in my own country because in Vietnam we have a lot of plays, a museum about the human Vietnam.

✓ I think I love my own country because in Vietnam we have a lot of parks and museums about Vietnamese history and culture.

The verb 'love' should take an object directly ('love my country'), not 'love in'. 'Plays' likely intended 'parks' or 'performances'; context suggests attractions so 'parks' and 'museums' fit. 'About the human Vietnam' is unclear; express as 'Vietnamese history and culture'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns to match meaning and place prepositions correctly after verbs of emotion.

× So when you go to Vietnam, you must try to view, see the view of Vietnamese.

✓ So when you go to Vietnam, you should try to see the Vietnamese scenery.

'Must try to view, see the view of Vietnamese' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use 'should try to see' for advice, and 'Vietnamese scenery' or 'the scenery of Vietnam' to refer to views. 'Vietnamese' alone is an adjective or plural noun for people; it cannot mean 'views'. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases like 'scenery' or 'landscapes' after verbs of perception.