Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct tense and singular/plural forms, and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, “because” or “so”). Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences. For instance, say why you take photos (to preserve memories) and give a specific example of a recent trip and what you remembered from a photo.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, on my last trip to the mountains I took a photo of the sunrise, and when I look at it I remember the fresh air and the colours of the sky. So photos help me recall details I might otherwise forget.

Suggestion: Improve clarity and coherence: state your preference clearly (urban or rural), use correct verb forms and articles, and add one specific reason with an example. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to connect ideas. Avoid irrelevant emotional words (e.g., “I was sad”) unless explaining feeling.

Example: I prefer urban views because I live in a big city and enjoy the variety of modern architecture. For example, I like walking along streets with contemporary buildings and interesting designs, which show how the city has changed over time.

Suggestion: Make your opinion clear and give specific, accurate details. Use correct nouns and articles (e.g., “my own country,” “the harbour”), and avoid vague phrases like “different kind of like box.” Mention a concrete feature and why it appeals to you, using linking words such as “for example” or “because.”

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and special to me. For example, Hong Kong’s Victoria Harbour offers a unique skyline with densely packed high‑rises and colourful ferries, and when tourists visit they often comment on how different it looks from other cities.

× I do like to take some picture of different view like when we traveling around the places.

✓ I do like to take some pictures of different views, like when we are traveling around places.

Incorrect use of plural nouns and the -ing form for a continuous action: 'picture' and 'view' should be plural to match 'some' and general meaning; 'when we traveling' needs the auxiliary verb 'are' plus present participle 'traveling' to form the present continuous. Also remove the article 'the' before 'places'. Suggestion: use plural nouns with quantifiers and use 'be + -ing' for ongoing actions (we are traveling).

× In that moment I wanted to record it and save it as a memory.

✓ At that moment I wanted to record it and save it as a memory.

Incorrect preposition/article usage: 'In that moment' is not standard; use 'At that moment' to refer to a specific time. The rest of the sentence is acceptable. Suggestion: use 'at that moment' for a precise point in time.

× When I seeing this picture I will remember all the details at the.

✓ When I see this picture I remember all the details.

Incorrect verb form and tense inconsistency: 'When I seeing' should be 'When I see' (simple present) or 'When I am seeing' but here habitual present 'see' fits. 'I will remember' creates mismatch; use simple present 'remember' for general truth. Also sentence ended incorrectly with 'at the.' Remove that fragment. Suggestion: use simple present in 'when' clauses for habitual situations.

× I was sad the urban area is much preferred 'cause right now I'm living in a big city.

✓ I prefer urban areas because right now I'm living in a big city.

Tense and meaning confusion: 'I was sad the urban area is much preferred' mixes past 'was' with present situation. The intended meaning is a present preference, so use 'I prefer urban areas' or 'I prefer the urban area' depending on context. Also replace informal 'cause' with 'because'. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for current preferences.

× There have a different kind of modern buildings and designed by different master.

✓ There are different kinds of modern buildings designed by different masters.

Incorrect use of 'there have' — standard English uses 'there is/are' to state existence. Also plural agreement: 'a different kind' conflicts with plural 'buildings'; change to 'different kinds' or 'a variety of'. 'Designed by different master' needs plural 'masters'. Suggestion: use 'There are' plus correct plural nouns and past participle 'designed' to describe the buildings.

× I quite prefer my field of my own country.

✓ I quite prefer the landscapes of my own country.

Awkward noun choice and article use: 'my field of my own country' is unidiomatic. Likely intended 'the scenery/landscapes of my own country.' Use 'the' with a defined noun and plural 'landscapes' for general scenes. Suggestion: choose appropriate noun like 'landscapes' or 'scenery' and use 'the' for specificity.

× Is this a quite unique the place in Hong Kong, There have a nice view of harbour and different kind of like box.

✓ It is quite a unique place in Hong Kong. There is a nice view of the harbour and many different kinds of tall buildings.

Multiple structure and article errors: 'Is this a quite unique the place' uses incorrect word order and extra articles; change to 'It is quite a unique place.' 'There have' should be 'There is' and 'harbour' requires 'the' when referring to the local harbour. 'different kind of like box' is unclear; likely means 'different kinds of box-like buildings' or 'tall box-like buildings' — corrected to 'many different kinds of tall buildings.' Suggestion: split into two sentences, use correct subject-verb 'There is', definite article 'the harbour', and clearer noun phrases.

× Some others tourists will come in our country and feel it.

✓ Some other tourists will come to our country and enjoy it.

Incorrect quantifier and preposition: use 'some other tourists' not 'some others tourists'. Also use preposition 'to' with 'come' (come to a country), and 'feel it' is vague — use 'enjoy it' or 'appreciate it'. Suggestion: use correct quantifier order and appropriate verbs for intended meaning.