Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add a brief reason with one linking phrase. Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax. For example, photographing sunsets and coastal landscapes calms me and lets me focus on composition.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and completeness, use linking words, and be specific about what you enjoy. Correct verb forms and finish your thought. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because they feel more natural and peaceful. For example, when I photographed a mountain in Banayoyo, Ilocos Sur during a weekend trip, the quiet atmosphere relaxed me and improved my photos' mood.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and unclear phrasing. Give a clear direct answer (either equal preference or explain preference) and one specific supporting reason and example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'also'.

Example: I don't have a strong preference; I enjoy views both at home and abroad. For instance, Philippine beaches are wonderfully calming, but I would also like to visit mountain ranges in Japan to see different scenery and cultural landscapes.

× Yes I do love taking pictures of different views, it's so calming and I like so much the view.

✓ Yes, I do love taking pictures of different views; it's so calming and I like the view so much.

This sentence has awkward word order and emphasis. 'I like so much the view' is not natural in English; the adverb 'so much' should follow the object: 'I like the view so much.' Also punctuation between independent clauses should be a semicolon or period. Suggestion: place adverbs after the object and use correct punctuation to join clauses. Grammar problem type ID:26

× For example, when I took photograph of the mountain during my weekend trip in Banayoyo, Ilocosur, the quiet atmosphere there relaxes me and gives me.

✓ For example, when I took a photograph of the mountain during my weekend trip to Banayoyo, Ilocos Sur, the quiet atmosphere there relaxed me and made me feel calm.

Multiple issues: 'took photograph' needs the article and noun form: 'took a photograph' (Grammar problem type ID:22 and 1). Use preposition 'to' for trips: 'trip to Banayoyo' (ID:11). 'Ilocosur' should be 'Ilocos Sur' (proper noun spacing). Tense consistency: the action happened in the past, so 'relaxes me and gives me' should be in past: 'relaxed me and made me feel calm' (ID:5). Also 'gives me' is incomplete; complete with 'made me feel calm.' Suggestions: add articles, correct prepositions, keep past tense consistent, and complete expressions. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I don't have any preference in my own country.

✓ I don't have any preference about my own country.

The preposition 'in' is not the best collocation here; native speakers usually say 'preference about' or 'preference for' when referring to a place (ID:11). Alternatively, 'I don't have a preference between my own country and others.' No verb error but preposition choice is awkward. Suggestion: use 'about' or 'for' or rephrase. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I still love the uh, views here in the Philippines because, uh, so natural and so calming in feeling.

✓ I still love the views here in the Philippines because they are so natural and so calming.

This sentence is a fragment with missing verb 'are' to link subject and adjectives (ID:23 and ID:6). 'So natural and so calming in feeling' is awkward; use 'they are so natural and so calming.' Remove fillers 'uh' for writing. Suggestion: include the verb 'are' and place adjectives after it. Grammar problem type ID:23

× But I also would like to experience to visit the views from other countries, of course.

✓ But I would also like to visit views in other countries, of course.

'Would like' is followed by the base verb, not 'to experience to visit' (double infinitive error) (ID:8). Simplify to 'would like to visit.' Also use 'views in other countries' rather than 'from other countries' for natural phrasing (ID:11). Suggestion: use correct verb pattern 'would like to + verb' and choose the correct preposition 'in.' Grammar problem type ID:8}]}README: The JSON string uses single quotes in the instructions; here standard JSON uses double quotes; ensure your consumer accepts this output.}ubborn correction.}