Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: You answered directly and gave an example, but there are repetitions, some grammar errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, remove repeated words, use a clear topic sentence, and correct tense and article use. Keep the answer within 2–4 sentences and add one linking phrase to make the example flow (e.g., “for example” or “then”).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me choose the best shot. For example, when I took photos in Europe, my first attempt was not great, so I tried another angle and got a much better picture.

Suggestion: Your answer is short and vague. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference (or that you like both), then give specific reasons and one brief example. Use comparative language correctly and avoid vague phrases like “much more beautiful.”

Example: I like views in both urban and rural areas because each offers different kinds of beauty. For instance, city views often have striking architecture and lights, while rural views offer peaceful landscapes and nature.

Suggestion: You expressed a clear opinion but used some informal and repetitive language and made grammatical mistakes. Improve by using one clear reason, avoid negative or potentially insensitive generalizations, correct repetition and tense, and provide a specific comparison or brief example.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because many cities I have visited abroad are more developed and well maintained. For example, I noticed cleaner streets and better parks in the cities I visited, which made the scenery more attractive.

× Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because because I can double check to see if it is a really good picture or not.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because I can double-check to see whether it is a really good picture or not.

Repeated 'because' is redundancy; 'double check' should be hyphenated as 'double-check' when used as a verb or kept as two words; 'to see if it is a really good picture or not' is acceptable but 'whether' is more formal and avoids redundancy. The error relates to word form and phrasing (present participle use and clarity). Suggestion: remove the duplicate 'because' and use 'double-check' or 'double check' consistently and use 'whether' for clarity.

× An example of this would be where I will have to take my first attempt to for a picture in Europe, then if it's not good then I'll take another one in a different view and it would be much better.

✓ An example is that I would take a first attempt at a picture in Europe; if it's not good, I'll take another one from a different angle and it will be much better.

Original sentence has word order and unnecessary words ('to for a picture') and mixed tenses. Corrected version simplifies structure, uses 'take a first attempt at a picture' and 'from a different angle' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: avoid redundant conjunctions ('then') and ensure correct preposition ('at' instead of 'to for'). Use consistent conditional tense ('if it's not good, I'll...').

× I like views in both areas because it doesn't matter if it's urban or rural as long as it's much more beautiful.

✓ I like views in both areas because it doesn't matter whether they're urban or rural, as long as they are beautiful.

Mismatch between singular/plural pronouns and vague comparative 'much more beautiful' without comparison target. Use 'whether' for alternatives and plural 'they' to refer to 'views.' Remove 'much more' which implies comparison; simply state 'beautiful.' Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun ('views' -> 'they') and use 'whether' for choices.

× I prefer views in other countries because in my country it doesn't seem pretty nice in the city, but if I go to other countries then it will be definitely be much better since since in other countries it is much more developed compared to my country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because, in my country, the city scenery doesn't seem very nice; when I go to other countries, it is definitely much better because they are more developed than my country.

Problems include awkward adverb/adjective use ('pretty nice' is informal), redundant words ('then it will be definitely be'), repeated 'since,' and unclear reference ('it is much more developed'—what is 'it'?). Correction clarifies reference to 'they' (other countries) and uses 'very' instead of 'pretty' for clarity. Suggestion: remove repetition, use clear subjects (countries/their cities), and choose appropriate adverb intensity ('very' or 'quite') and natural comparative phrasing ('more developed than').